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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 18:50 EDT
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I justed wanted to say how much I truly loved that last chapter :) Wonderful just wonderful. I liked it so much that I had to do another fanart for it :D http://kinky-typo.deviantart.com/art/Free-My-Heart-119156758
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 22:59 EDT
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Ooooh, I really liked this chapter. It's interesting to watch them get to know each other in this sort of situation. I would like to see Bulma react a little more to Vegeta's gruffness, instead of always understanding and accepting it, but then again, I guess if I was locked in a room with a naked Vegeta, I'd be pretty damn understanding of him too! *drools* I was so excited when I thought Bulma had figured the collar out, so now I'm really itching to see how they beat the damn thing. Alo, like some other reviewers have said, I really don't mind your talkative Vegeta. He's in a weird place, mentally and emotionally, so I think we readers have to accept that he's not going to be the same Vegeta we know (Our canon Vegeta is free, not an imprisoned slave with little hope for anything better; of course some of his normal bravado is going to be missing!) and I think you're doing a good job of it. Keep going with your gut feelings. I know I'll still be reading!!
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 16:47 EDT
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I don't feel that Vegeta is too talkative. Not that he'd ever admit it, but he's just found a kindred spirit, someone with some of the same problems, and they can relate. I am really liking this story and am looking forward to the next update. Well done. :)
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 14:51 EDT
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I don't see any problem with Vegeta talking as much as you're having him. What else is he going to do, glare at Bulma each time she talks? Your way is much more entertaining. I love how they're both having trouble with their feelings towards each other, even though they're both just concentrating on the lust factor for now. Can't wait to see how their further attempts at escaping play out.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: April 12, 2009 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter. It's amazing how fast you're updating. I'm loving this Vegeta, if anyone can make him talk it's you!You manage to pour his soul out in four words! LOL. I hope Jeice and Zarbon can't see what they're up to with the collar.
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 13:01 EDT
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oh, i'm in love with this story already. i'm thrilled that you've picked up this couple again! i can't wait to see where you're going with this! despite your concern about your talkative Vegeta, i think he works. he may be more talkative than we're used to, yes, but he's still perfectly in character. case in point: he's saying all of the things i would expect Vegeta to say if he opened up more, ya know? keep up the good work! can't wait for the next chapter :D
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 10:42 EDT
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Cries!!!!!! I like vegeta this way. i'm getting a better picture of him like this. it's like opening up a door to his soul,for just a second. Wonderfully done. Stay true to what your heart wants you to write.
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 07:03 EDT
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Three simple words: I LOVE IT! Thanks for another amazing chapter..but gods the suspense is *killing* me!!! but I love the way the characters are unfolding :) If you ask me Vegeta's character is like it should be, but I must say that that's the case in all your fanfics about him. I think in all, that you're a better judge of his character then me because i know that I could never stay so true to the charater of our sinful sexy saiyan prince! I'm looking forwards to the next chap! Lovies EV
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Reviewed By: Tempy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 02:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic chapter. Your character development and use of details is riveting. It's all so wonderfully descriptive and well put together. I think both Bulma and Vegeta are well within the possibilities of their respective personalities. You're doing a wonderful job, and I'm glad you're going with your gut. Keep the story true to what you want it to be, and I'm sure that it will keep being outstanding. As always, patiently awaiting another great new chapter.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: NetteTeTigress On: April 12, 2009 00:32 EDT
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OMG..your cliffhangers have me dying here..In response to your A.N...i dont feel Vegeta is to talkative, i feel he is just right and totally in character..please please update asap
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Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: April 12, 2009 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am pretty much in love with this story. I really like the way that it is unfolding, and I don't mind Vegeta's loquaciousness at all. Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 21:14 EDT
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Wow that was amazing! I think that's my favorite chapter thus far. I think you're doing the right thing by being true to your heart and writing this the way YOU want it and not what other people want. It makes the story unique and interesting. Oh and thank you so much for the kind words in the beginning of the chapter! You are too kind! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 12:47 EDT
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Awesome chapter. Things are really heating up *fans face*. I drew a fanart highly inspired by your fic if you'd like to check it out. :D http://kinky-typo.deviantart.com/art/Art-Jam-Watched-118543998
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: Ankhnaton [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 23:45 EDT
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brilliant..your keeping the both of them completely in character, and the sexual tension between them is delicous..continue to upload plz ;D
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 23:10 EDT
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Another great chapter. Good to see Bulma and Vegeta 'bond' in their unique way. Can't wait for more.
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