| "The Blue Eyed Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 04:06 CDT
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Oh, my! Chapter 8 was awesome! Hiei returns! *dun dun dun dun!* And Kurama didn't even notice because he was so taken with Kagome's aura. So, Hiei immediately orders Kagome to "Come here," and she goes and tries to soothe his irritation. That played out perfectly in character to me. Nice job! I would have been just a bit worried when Hiei hustled her back to the room if you hadn't added in that last bit about the fire in her eyes. I'm imagining a bit of a lovers' quarrel is about to take place. Yes? ^_^ This is such a fun piece to read! I am enjoying it so much and I can't wait for your next installment. Thanks for the entertainment!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 03:51 CDT
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Loved chapter 7! Kagome's nervousness and awkwardness was so cute. I give you BIG kudos for having Kurama think "Kagome? What a weird name." Have to run right on to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: June 25, 2009 22:33 CDT
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I love this story. Gotta love a possessive jerk like Hiei. Sooooo lovable. He's like a plushie that REALLY needs a hug. Submissive? Kagome? Yeah, right. Just wait till they get behind closed doors. :D Update this story as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: my3rdeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2009 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story sure make me giggling alright.normally we often read about kurama 'HAPPINESE'and hiei sulking but this story just refreshingly wow...can't wait wat will happend with curious fox and what his planing?hope he not doing something naughty...
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Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 20:09 CDT
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*has a sudden need to draw a jealous Youko around Kagome and Hiei doing something random...*
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 16:56 CDT
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Woohoo! And Kurama comes face-to-face with "The Blue-eyed Beauty." Yes! This is great! So, just how pissed is Hiei going to be when he gets back? And I can't wait for the conversation to come. *rubs hands together in anticipation* Nice reaction he had there. Who will speak first? Oh, the agony of waiting!
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Reviewed By: madmiko, notsignedin On: June 20, 2009 16:50 CDT
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Chapter 5 had me giggling the whole way through. You are definitely making me feel sorry for poor Kurama. With Youko as a constant companion and Hiei and as a friend, well, he needs to get out and meet some more people. ^_~ I love the idea of Hiei feeling the need to set up his own territory. Claiming the bedroom of an apartment might not be enough, though. I am also enjoying the way you always update with 2 chapters for us to enjoy. I'm on to the next one.
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha... poor Kurama
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 22:12 CDT
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Heeheehee! I feel so sorry for Kurama. He's so curious about Hiei's mate, and yet there are some things he would rather not know. You really managed to tease and tantalize us with just a few words, too. You didn't have to get graphic or explicit at all to give us the feel of the lovemaking going on in the next room. ^_~ I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 22:00 CDT
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Chapter 3 was very, very interesting! I am still completely loving your approach to this: telling the story through Kurama's observations and thoughts. His realization that Hiei would rather he and his mate starve than for her to think someone else--namely Kurama--had any hand in helping feed, clothe, or protect her in any way. I've never seen anyone play up that need so strongly before,and I'm loving it! I have to laugh, though, that his need to provide does not preclude stealing Youko's dinner. LOL! Awesome!
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Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 21:49 CDT
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LOL I would've had her scream louder right after Youko's comment on it XD but i have no self control like when it comes to trying to make hiei best at everything...and in any case Love it love it love it love it
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!
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Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2009 13:31 CDT
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X3 ooohhh can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: June 12, 2009 21:47 CDT
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I love your stories. You have such neat ideas. :) It's refreshing.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 17:43 CDT
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Wah! More? More, please? I'm hooked!
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