| "Meeting My Yami" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool now all they have to do is find that one dud whatever the hell his name is... |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam On: December 19, 2002 10:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah the ending to da last chapter weren't that bad. I've seen worse. So will Yugi start kicking ass again? And is Yami and Yugi gonna kiss? Well? WEELLL!!!! YOU KNOW FROM THIS TONE THAT YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS YOUNG LADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
I LUV THIS STORY DON'T DISCONTINUE IT PULZ. IF YOU DO YOU'LL MAKE ME CRY AND GO INTO A BOUT OF DEPRESSION!!!!! I'll hate you if you stop updating this story. I MEAN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: yugiohlover On: December 08, 2002 14:46 CST
Comment/Review:
YOU CAN'T! You can't discontinue. I must know what happens. I love your fic. You can't stop now! Please don't stop. I'll die if you stop. If you stop I'll track you down and bug you untill you continue. You can't keep a stupid person in suspense!!! NNOOOOOOOOOOO! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 01:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a really great story! Please don't end it yet, I want to see what happens as they try to get the other items together and also what happens to Yugi and Yami. Please post more?! |
Reviewed By: Shoyru64 On: December 04, 2002 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usally don't do reviews, but this on was so good!!!!
I really like the truth or dare parts, and alot of the story, still there were still a couple things I didn't like,(just like two) but your story was so good!!!! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 06:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi... did I review already? o_0? *goes to check* Oh never mind. I luv it THAT much apparently. I'm kinda of in a writers block in my fics at the moment *tries to shift around but is held down by chains tied to a huge slab of stone labelled WRITER'S BLOCK* so now I'm passing my time reading your fics for God knows how many times until inspiration finally hits me *watches as an anvil labelled INSPIRATION falls from the sky and misses her* DAMN IT!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE ELSE I'LL GO INSANE!!!!!
Yami: Aren't you already insane?
Yeah... but that's normal insane, I'm talking insane insane.
Yami: o_0? Performing enemas on your muses is what you call normal? *Madyamisam nods* O.O... |
Reviewed By: yugiohlover On: November 15, 2002 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How do you keep a stupid person in suspense?
By not getting out the next chapter soon enough.I love this fic it's one of the best ones out there. But you need to write faster!! I mean I'm going to die of curiosity before you get the next chapter out. PLEEEEEEASE hurry!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 12, 2002 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Please post more soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Bakurafan On: November 08, 2002 15:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Ummm... this is not meant to be flames er nothin... Are all the yamis and their aibous gay? Yami seems a bit off.Kissing Yugi goodnight? Yami Bakura's new direction i like, but a litle less feminism would do. :-) |
Reviewed By: whitelight101 On: October 26, 2002 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed this fanfic alot keep up the good work in future chapters!!!! |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 20:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
arrgh!!!! a CLIFFY!!!!! WHY????? WHY ARE YOU BEING SO MEAN TO US?????????? *sobs* arrrrgh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pleasepleaseplease UPDATE SOON!!!!! |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 15:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU WOMAN?! FINISH THAT DAMN CHAPTER FOR THE LOVE OF HOLY GACKT!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT DOES HE DO?!?! -strangles her- DON'T MAKE ME START STALKING YOU!!! > |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Review, review..review...review..-sings Shining Collection from Gravitation for some odd reason- xD Sing with me! :D |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 20, 2002 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really a great story! Please add more to it soon?! As for writers block (I think you mentioned in another fic that you have trouble with it) my suggestion would be to write out the chapters for the things that you know you want to happen (even if you skip a little bit of time) and then go back and fill in the gaps. You can always edit the other chapters later to include new information. Another thing you can do is to make a chart or list of what you want to happen when. Those two things usually help me. Hope that helps! |
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