| "Card Captor Sakura - Altered World" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: LindaN On: September 24, 2001 00:44 CDT
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I've read the first 7 chapters of your story so far and this is really good! And I'm looking forward to reading more....thanks! Linda |
Reviewed By: Umi On: October 09, 2001 18:49 CDT
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I don't see why this has such a low rating...I suspect some people gave you bad ratings on purpose? Oh well...it's a good fic. Don't listen to the raters! All I have to say is that your writing style could use some imporovement but cool plot! |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 13, 2001 13:40 CDT
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Great story! Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: LindaN On: October 14, 2001 09:58 CDT
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I have revote on your story and will continue to do so until it stands once again with the rating it deserves. It is well written and deserves much better, and I encourage everyone out there to reread and revote. Thank you. Linda |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 14, 2001 19:00 CDT
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This was very well written...your an ff.net author too? Me too how cool! Ff.net is on the fritz again U_U...ah well Xing Li will get it back up in no time...that guy/girl is amazing!*Can't wait to read the rest of the story.! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 14, 2001 19:07 CDT
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This chapter was exceptional! Did you say you were inexperienced? No way! The only thing i thought was a lil messy was somewhere in the fic where i heard "Sakura" in the beginning of nearly every sentence in the paragraph. |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 18:40 CDT
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OH i love this fic!!! it's so kawaii! Like there's serious stuff every now and then, and funny stuff and cute romantic stuff! Go girl go! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 18:47 CDT
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*sweatdrop* Just realized they put "Secret Hideout" if you don't put anything in the Country box...oy vey where'd they get this stuff? lol
Back to your fic...as usual the chapter is wonderful! You should be so proud of your work! *pats back* I love it! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 18:57 CDT
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God I love my comp...*hugs computer*...it has this automatic thingy so I don't have to write Dee-chan (moongiggles bla bla bla) all the time...and sadly U_U I'm not the amazingly gifted D-chan writer of such fics as I don't have the memory to remember...we just share the same name different spelling...it was a coincidence ppl! Check ff.net anytime it'll say how long I've had this name! no wait ff.net is ON THE FRITZ!!! argh sry I tend to talk too much but now about ur fic..
I like how Li-kun acts...it's actually quite amusing and I've have to say that most of the humor in this story is from him...who woulda thunk it? Mr. Serious turned into Mr. Funny ha lol..anyways I have to say that I'm a lil sad only the TINIEST bit about how Sakura is pictured as this gorgeous, ms. girl that every guy wants and Tomoyo is like sorta shoved into the background. Sakura, Eriol, Li, and Tomoyo are my four fav ccs characters and i think that most of us will agree that Tomoyo is pretty darn pretty too! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:05 CDT
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If your killing urself over this at least in my opinion u won't die for nothing...erm ok maybe that wasn't a good example but your fic is turning out great! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:19 CDT
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This chapter was yet another huge success in my eyes...In some ways i like how you portrayed Tomoyo and in others i don't i like how you said she was like a shield for Sakura but you sort of gave her an ice queen image u know? Kinda like your making her hide her real self like hse's some closed off person or something I guess...but I love your work! It's so...so i dont' know but it's really good!! ^_^...and gomen for talkinga bout Tomoyo so much...i tend to worry too much about the characters that most ppl think to be pushed to the sidelines... |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:25 CDT
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I for one like this fic because of the wonderful writing style and the great way your writing it! ^_^ Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:32 CDT
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I agree Meiling is a great character too even though sometimes I could really hurt her for being so possessive of Li-kun when he belongs to sakura but romances are always so interesting if they're love triangles nay? I think you should add more "original" stuff in your fics you know? your so true to the episodes especially in this chapter...so just try to add YOUR stuff in other wise it's just like watching the episodes over again well sorta except your reading and erm nevermind i'll shuddup now...U_U |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:40 CDT
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Don't worry you definately deserve these reviews I rate this chapter a ten...so sweet esp ethe touya and his g/f hugging can't recall her name now...^_^; |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan (moongiggles89@hotmail.com) On: October 15, 2001 19:49 CDT
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I love this chapter...i give it a Ten...^_^ i don't exactly love the girl either but she's a very interesting and very human character.. |
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