| "Card Captor Sakura - Altered World" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ragna Blade On: November 18, 2001 11:57 CST
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The storyline up to Chapter 2 seems cute and overall looks like you'll summarize the series, but I have no to clue to what is "Hoe." As for '-chan,' I believe you are mistaken. From what I've seen of its usage in the past, '-chan' is more a term of affection and familiarity instead of meaning little (ie. 'nii-chan means older brother.) |
Reviewed By: Ragna Blade On: November 18, 2001 12:19 CST
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When I mentioned "Hoe" earlier I'm refering to Sakura's speech patterns with it. Chapter 3 is also confusing since you have Sakura first greet Li when entering the classroom and he's seated behind her, but the home form(I'm guessing you mean room) teacher introduce Li later seating him behind Sakura because of the availability. I believe you just misplaced the paragraph, but it is still confusing none the less when reading. |
Reviewed By: Ragna Blade On: November 18, 2001 14:15 CST
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Loved Ch 4, funny and cute at the same time. LOL. OMG, Ch 5 & 6 were unbelievable. Li is just too cute for words ^_^. LMAO *panting* I can't believe you just did that to Li in ch 7. Can't really complain since I loved it but still. And thank you for finally bringing in Touya and Yukito/Yue into the picture. Yue would've been my favorite if not for Li. Don't have much to say for Ch 8-10 except good plot development, but not much action except Li's reaction at the end of Ch 10. |
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