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 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 18, 2009 23:54 EST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... good that kaede went to talk to sango... so sango's pregnant... would have been a happy moment but miroku isn't there... what will sango do now?... will miroku find out?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 18, 2009 23:15 EST
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i thought she was being overly hormonal. some people get CRAZY when they're going through puberty, pregnancy, menopause. now someone has to explain that to her husband. ♥
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2009 02:55 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Excellent update! It all makes sense now...even I had forgotten that Sango's back is all scarred up, and I bet the village women sure would gossip about it, too. Sango tries to act all tough because that's how she was raised, but deep down inside, she's still a woman, and women can be emotional and fragile at times. Fortunately, it does look (at least to me) like you plan on making this a true canon. I'm sure Sango will figure out where Miroku must have gone, and go to find him. I really like what you're doing here, because the manga doesn't give us any information for what happened to them during those three missing years. That leaves a lot of room for creative licence. Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2009 00:23 EST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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good update... so sango is alone now... miroku and inuyasha left... is kaede still around - maybe she'll go talk to her... what will sango do now?... will kagome come back in this story?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2009 00:49 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Well, the first two people said it, so I guess I will as well...interesting...LOL. I am curious as to whether or not this will wind back around into a true canon story, if they eventually work out their problems, or if you are taking us on a completely alternate-ending kind of adventure. It doesn't seem like Miroku and Sango have been married very long at this point in time, and there are obviously no little ones involved yet. That has me wondering...how early in pregnancy does all that crazy emotional stuff start? Nah...I'm sure at least Inuyasha would've realized...right? Okay, so that's probably not it, but if that's not it, then what the blazes is wrong with Sango? I guess I'll just have to keep reading and find out. :-)
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 23, 2009 23:49 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... caught my attention since i don't usually read miroku/sango stories unless kagome/inuyasha are main characters... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
 Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 23, 2009 23:28 EDT
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Odd story so far, and definitely has some issues, but it's interesting enough to be worth another look. Update it, and I'll see what I find. Update again soon, ja ne.
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