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| "Concessions" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: The Inevitable Return of the Great White Dope
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 03:38 CST
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Seriously, can't Naruto get a break!? This is the third story I've seen with the plot stated in the description (sans Pein). Though, the first two were actually the same story (rewrite). Still, this looks promising. Though, I thought it would have been Pein or Naruto who prevented Minato's death. I actually doubt the Kyuubi's plan for survival would work, though. The Shinigami, or pretty much any kami or god with a focus on time or life/death would immediately notice the discrepency, and bitch slap Kyuubi through seven different dimensions before he winds up tentacle-raped... or sealed inside someone in love with Orochimaru. Not sure which is worse. And this is completely ignoring the fact that Naruto will likely end up very knowledgeable in seals, and could probably use them to give an even worse punishment to the fox. Bleh, hate douchebags. Surprised Naruto didn't glare at Minato for his outburst at Sarutobi. Naruto loved the old man, and he was one of the few people Naruto respected, so he wouldn't take to kindly to some stranger threatening him. Just my two cents. Whatever. Your story is good so far, and you have close to the same number of chapters as 'The Kyuubi's Gift, Second Coming', so I will give you the benefit of the doubt. Just waiting to laugh my ass off when the first words Naruto speaks will be Ero-Sennin. Don't try to deny it. He's finally going to speak because of Jiraiya'a bad habits, and it's going to terrify, horrify, stupify, humilify, and entertainify everyone within hearing distance! I've called it. If you decide to change it because of me, then bluntly state so and congratulate the Autistic Oregonian for perceiving it. And as for this posts title, it's a song by the Bloodhound Gang. Unrelated, really, but Naruto and Minato are definitely caucasian, and Naruto really can be dumb sometimes. But, god damn it, that's why we love the blonde! Hinata-chan can't be that wrong, can she? And if anyone says she is, well... I could mention a river in Egypt, but I'd probably make more sense talking about ass-rape. And that is sad. Ja ne. The Goliath's Commandment - In accordance with Statute 73 of the Awesome Act, Ninja's are hereby banned from Peach Orchards ~ Hanicas reminiscing about the song 'Peaches' by 'The Presidents of the United States of America' PS: HOLY SHIT! Naruto's pranks are going to seriously mess people up this time around. If he can deface Mt. Rushmore in Broad daylight when he has practicly no ninja training, just imagine how much more awesome they will be now!
| Reviewed By: Krystina On: February 13, 2010 00:11 CST
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While I like the concept behind this fanfiction, I'm wondering how fast you're going to have the time pass? 16 years is a lot to relive, even in fanfiction. Still looking forward to an update, though. I'll probably follow it on FF.net
| Title: oddball1098
Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2010 04:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! looking forward to the next chpter ^^
| Reviewed By: ...... On: January 27, 2010 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...awesome idea. I hope you continue this.
| Reviewed By: Karina Garcia On: January 24, 2010 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i never would have thought of this story.. its so unique and i like the fact that the yodaime was smart enough to not to like the stupid pity thanks the ppl were giving him about his wife.. im sad she died but im happy you mad this story i hope you update soon.
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