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 Title: Whp i think kagome should be paired with
Reviewed By: catpanther [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 07, 2010 18:42 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think that kagome should be paired with inuyasha the main reason i say that is because inuyasha is hurtting and needs her while though sesshomoru seems to be likeing her i would think it best if he and her not be together. they seem to different plue i like reading about inuyasha and kagome more then sesshomaru.
 Reviewed By: Spang1993  On: May 07, 2010 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
INUYASH! After some serious butt kissing, of course.
 Reviewed By: not signed in and can't remember the password  On: May 07, 2010 16:45 PDT
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POLYANDRY! or I/K!
 Reviewed By: bettychan  On: May 05, 2010 23:24 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think I'd like this to be an Inuyasha/Kagome pairing. But only after hanyou Inuyasha does some major groveling. And I do mean major. He has a lot to make up for. But on the other hand, a Sesshoumaru/Kagome pairing would serve Inuyasha right. He did betray her in the most heinous way after all. This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I love the suspense you're building. I also love your characterizations. When Sango got mad and yelled at Inuyasha, I could feel her rage. I can feel Kagome's pain too. Very good writing there. Hope you do well on your exams and update as soon as you can.
 Title: dun dun dun!
Reviewed By: inu_slayer078  On: May 05, 2010 20:30 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love the cliffhanger and i can't wait to read more! :D so amazing girl, keep up the good work! (i'm still crossing my fringers for InuKag, but i love sesshy too.)
 Reviewed By: tims_girl_ashley [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2010 11:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
continue as quickly as possible.... i cant wait to c what happens next
 Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 04, 2010 23:55 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OOOHHHH Good CLiffie... LOL I still say that Sesshomaru and Kagome should be together, but maybe they can compromise and it could be InuYasha (once he gets his head out of his ass so to speak), Sesshomaru and Kagome. They both are attracted to her so it could be possible. Keep up the great work and update soon.
 Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 04, 2010 20:26 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
My reviews really make you that happy? Well I'm glad! Anyway I'm sorry to say I can't take the time to write one of my long reviews for you tonight. I have two finals tomorrow- one right after the other. So I need to be cramming right now. You totally made my day with this update though- so thanks for that. I still want to see Inuyasha's demon side get to be with Kagome, but I want to slap the other two parts of him with a wet fish. It looks like you got a long review after all. -DuskenDreamer
 Title: Daisuki!
Reviewed By: Seryna-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 04, 2010 16:15 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my matsujun! I freakin love this fic! I swear by all that is sesshoumaru, that if kags doesn't end up with sesshy, blood will be spilled! I mean it! Oh, nd btw, this is an awesome fic nd your doing an excellent job! Keep up the good work!
 Title: Sess/Kag pairing Please
Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 28, 2010 22:53 PDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope, I really really hope that this is a Sess/Kag Pairing! All the other reviews say that it has to be Inuyasha but honestly he has hurt Kagome way to much...I honestly hate the idea of her going back to him (but in the end its your story I'm just stating my opinion)seriously though make Sessy be the one to not only heal her but love her (of course with Sessy's personality it will take a while but its do-able) anyways if for some ridiculous, crazy, stupid reason you decide to pair Kagome with Inuyasha PLEASE dont pair Sessy with Kagura oh how I despise that pairing...and no Rin either! (which wouldnt work anyway since she is a child) I must say though that I love your story and I cant wait till you update next! oh and if you do decide to make this a Sess/Kag pairing not only will I love you forever but I would also recommend that you Post this Story on Dokuga (which if you dont know is a site dedicated to Sess/Kag pairings) :D
 Title: omg
Reviewed By: inu_slayer078  On: April 28, 2010 20:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter!!! what the hell is up with Sango? dang. i love it tho! (although i'm secretly hoping it was naraku in disguise lol) can't wait to see where you take this story!!! :D
 Reviewed By: Inudewaruika (nsi)  On: April 28, 2010 14:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
here i reviewed, good story!
 Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 28, 2010 00:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
-sigh- how could Kagome fall for that trick (well I know how but still)? Its essentially the same one Naraku used on Inuyasha and Kikyo. In that sense its perfect- framed betrayal using a loved one seems to be Naraku's signature move. I'm loving this story, and especially the fact that Sesshomaru is actually IN character. Not many people can pull that off- when it comes to romance I have yet to be able to do so myself. Good luck with exams and all- I've got finals coming up myself. -DuskenDreamer
 Reviewed By: coykoi  On: April 27, 2010 10:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
I see it as Sesshoumaru protecting his sister in law. He's the companiable silence that stops her from tring to hurt herself, like with the fire. All I know is that Inuyasha has some serious ass kissing to do, though I don't think he can be redeemed after beating Kagome and doing nothing while she died. I mean he just stood there and did nothing.
 Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: inu_slayer078  On: April 25, 2010 18:22 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh, so good! i can't wait to read more. poor kagome, poor inuyasha. man, i really want them to end up together!
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