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| "Basic Instinct 2" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] | Reviewed By: stormkick On: May 22, 2013 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I thought it was well-written and creative. | Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2012 19:19 EDT
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Heh, now all we need is a threequel where they're both turned to dogs. *snickers* Poor Inuyasha, trying the good old fashioned "ease the pain" dog tactic. Dunno why he thought he'd be able to resist her, once she got it in her head that she didn't care what his body looked like. Kikyou is a perv, indeed! Dunno why I hadn't reviewed this earlier, I loved the first one. | Reviewed By: kirr1001 On: October 14, 2011 13:13 EDT
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okay, the animal sex thing was... weird and shocking.but really, he wasn't a dog, he was just the same Inuyasha like always and it shows that love can win everything :D I liked this very much. | Reviewed By: Lady_Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2011 21:39 EDT
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hehehehehe I loved this story!! True love does conquer all sometimes!!! great sequel!!!! | Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2010 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this one, even though I was a little squicked by the bestiality factor. But it was still Inuyasha and we know that Kagome would love him no matter what and this proves it. It probably wouldn't have happened that soon but I can see that that is where the mating bond comes into play as it been stated several times that they were feeling a pull to mate. I also liked how you showed both Inuyasha's thoughts that he would degrade Kagome as well as her thoughts about why she would be willing. I thoroughly enjoyed the confrontation with Kouga. The only other thing I would have wanted to see was them come across Sesshomaru while Inuyasha was still a dog. I would have loved to see his reaction, probably something about Inuyasha just proving his inferiority or something. Great job as always.
| Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2010 01:08 EDT
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Wow! What can I say, I enjoyed this little Inu/Kag romp a little too much. Would you call me crazy to say that I actually wanted more of the scene where Inu/Kag go at it for the first time? I think it is very nice of you as the author to not put our favorite duo through that, but I did find it intriguing (in a crazy sort of way). I can see where some people might be a little upset at the type of coupling in this story, but I personally had no problem with it. Perhaps if the warning was a little more explicit as to what would be happening. (It was cut off on the first summary as you browse through the stories.) I think it was very apparent from the get-go exactly what was going to happen--but then I've been reading your stuff for a while now. :-) I certainly was not surprised by the outcome. :-P Hey, this is you, we know they are going to have some crazy (and hot) lemons if you are writing them and hey, most of us just love 'em. More power to you and please keep writing! I am happily looking forward to your collaboration with King Baka. I'm sure that it'll be funny, but I'd like to put in my two cents and say, yes to the humor--but I'd also love a lemon in there somewhere. :-P (What can I say, I love your lemons.)
| Title: *one long wolf whistle*
Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2010 09:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Insert Animal-Lover Joke Here!'.......It certainly was different, I'll tell you that much. It was very well written, creative, enjoyable, and so on. The hot spring scene was a bit unusual, but it's understandable to how they felt. For Kagome's half she was looking into his eyes, and not caring about his form. And for Inuyasha, he's really trying to please here regardless of himself. And, you know, it was good that you made him change back before they took it too far, so there's really nothing wrong with it. I though it was romantic, and funny, somewhat sadistic for Kikyou to have such a twisted idea to break the spell. Hell, it would of been an idea I would of have, cause I'm strange like that too. Anyway, GREAT JOB, and I always love your work, so keep it up. YOU ROCK THE WHOLE HOUSE!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Er...
Reviewed By: Sparkly Faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2010 07:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest, I had a little trouble with this one. Not so much the 'turned into a dog' part, since it's a very big fanon belief that InuYasha is overwhelmingly canine in one aspect or another and I have therefore come to accept the premise in one form or another, but merely because of what was required to return him into his human form. I'd guessed it as soon as Kaede informed them that there was only one way to turn him back, but I very much wanted to deny it; bestiality isn't something that I can very readily accept. Throughout the 'hot spring scene', all I could really think was a horror-stricken "Oh, God, she's not really...?!?!", since I doubt any reasonable person would be even WILLING to perform such an act with a dog. It's just sick and wrong, and all manner of attributes that you can apply to it. --- Another thing that really 'got my goat' in this fic is Kikyou's overwhelming sense of evil. She. Is. Not. Evil., and it really annoys me when she is portrayed as such. There would have been no overwhelmingly cliché "What is the meaning of this?!" moment in canon. =.=;; In reality, she likely would have said something along the lines of "Oh. I see how it is." and merely left them with that, not coming to see InuYasha again; partially to punish him, partially to let him get on with it. Sure, maybe in the early manga she would have gotten angry and gotten back at him, but I highly doubt she'd have cast a spell on him that took advantage of his youkai side, since she appeared to attempt to deny its very existence. Likely she would have lured Kagome out on her own and tried to take her out directly, if she did anything of the sort at all. But there's no real indication of WHEN this is supposed to take place, so there's no indicator of how it should be, besides the fact that early InuYasha would have NEVER even contemplated 'mating' (another fanon term that really annoys me) with Kagome. Not even in a daydream. --- Yes, I can see how this is daring, and yes, I know you put warnings in the summary. The fact remains that people are going to read it anyway, since most people only read what summary appears in the listing, which actually cuts off those warnings. An Author's Note would have been nice. --- Even a month ago, this wouldn't have seemed so bad to me; except I've read more than a few fics that rely heavily on fanon details and I'm sick of them. The reason for the low rating is merely the fact that the fanon crap incorporated into the fic offsets any originality it may have contained. And I'm sorry to sound harsh, if that's the way I'm coming off, and this is in no way a flame (my flames generally contain a lot of cussing), but there needs to be brutal, honest feedback and the reviews that I've read for this thing are all essentially glowing praise. I figured that the other side of the spectrum needed to be heard.
| Title: Hi again xD
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2010 22:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I loved the sequel... I was great!!! and I HATE kikyo... but like her idea xD I mean this was totally DIFFERENT from everything else I've read!!! really!!! you really turned this to something great xD you really showed up the inu-youkai side of Inuyasha xD and I loved the way you made the lemon... i mean it wasn't ALL as inu in that form... just... you know... the hard part xD jijijiji but one thin that i noticed... it's that inu said that he wouldn't do her on the roots... or somehting like that... well i understand it as the forest floor... so it was like... mmmm it wasn't on the forest floor... it was on the floor beside the hot spring jijijij xD that's the only thin i noticed that didn't fit xD but it was still soooooooo great... i was so excited when i saw you've posted the sequel... thank you for hearing us all out xD and it was just as great as the first one.... even better because of the lemon... and kikyo is EVIL... and i HATE her!!! yeah!!! and i loved how bad she was... and even a little hentai like you said jijiji xD Well I'll keep waiting for you're next post, you did a GREAT job with this fic, really amazing, take care a lot and a big congratulating hug xD byebye Eiko007
| Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2010 19:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I was skeptical about the mating bond, but then I grew to like it. How it took just a little of the higher thinking away, the nervousness, the things that might have held them back. I was also skeptical about Kikyou, because I'm not a Kikyou-hater and I don't like it when people make her pure evil. But you stayed away from that, while showing that Kikyou is bitter and hateful. This line was really good: You may think I am without compassion in this body, Inuyasha, but I did love you, once. If her heart is truly yours, then all will be well, and she will have proven that her love for you truly surpasses my own. I *really* liked how you handled their relationship once Inuyasha became a dog. Spot on with his pessimism, Kagome's attempts to be optimistic, and their interactions. The entire hot spring scene was…wow. You somehow made such an unbelievable thing so very believable. I know that was a challenge for you, and you rose to it with gusto. It's so, so touching, how big Kagome's heart is. She's always seen past Inuyasha's hanyou body to the man underneath, but this was taking that to an extreme. "Love was a powerful emotion." Ain't that the truth? I'm sensing a theme to the story. :) God, I can't stop smiling right now. This story really made my day.
| Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2010 12:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! A little out of the ordinary...but great! It was a nice sequel!
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: kanna37 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2010 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was certainly daring - and I haven't seen anything like this out there, so it was also very different! Awesome job! Amber
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