| "Paternity of a Princess" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: Ancalador
Reviewed By: Ancalador [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 04:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed the story so far but I don't think I will continue if Ranma ends up with Endymion. Ranma is rabidly against relations with any male in Canon, as his reaction to being kissed by Mikado of the Golden Pair. Also in The Fist of the Moon Ranma doesn't regain his male gender, it is implied that Usagi uses Spring of Drowned Man.
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Reviewed By: ianmajor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 01:56 EDT
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I find this one the most interesting so far, following by Soul divide, then happi, I loved Fist of the Moon, and I would love to see how this goes.
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Reviewed By: PCHeintz72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 01:07 EDT
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Hmmm.... Just read chapter 3 Well, it is obvious Sailor Pluto set Ranma up, or at a minimum put Ranma and Usagi in this situation by deliberate inaction, and is now only giving half the info. As such, even if Ranma reacts as Pluto wants toward the senshi, and even if you intend Ranma to be permanently locked as indicated by author notes, I would hope Ranma goes on a lifelong quest to make Pluto's life as miserable as is possible by any means nessecary in retaliation for what was done to him/her. Otherwise, justice is not being served and a criminal gets away with her crime. Because it is all but certain Usagi and others did not seem of a mind to do anything to Pluto at the end of that scene.
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Reviewed By: wolf40k [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2010 20:45 EDT
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???? I'm pretty sure that this is the wrong story you updated.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy it so far. Can't wait for more. I don't mind if you got inspired by 'Fist of the Moon' for Ranma's curse removal. Great job.
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Reviewed By: ianmajor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2010 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this start, even though it greatly resembles one of my other Favorite Ranma as a Senshi fics, but off the 3 I like this the best.
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