| "Gokou's Unemployment" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Heikgan On: August 10, 2002 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok heres an idea Goku goes to the moonmines (i dont know how to spell it) and finds out what vegeta does in his time off |
Reviewed By: SSJ_Kajata On: August 10, 2002 05:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think Gokou should try for a part in Digimon, by the way great fanfic! |
Reviewed By: kio87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good idea! ive never seen another like it! *clapps* however. *clears throat* while i find EXTREMLY funny, it lacks... uh... ok i'll be blunt. you need more detail and other sentance types other then compound and simple! i'm really bad that that too! ^_^ but VERY good idea's!! hehe! here's where Goku should go next, Yu-Gi-Oh or some other card type show! ^_^ |
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