| "Little Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: ZellDincht [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 01:29 CST
Comment/Review:
If you want to get up off your sorry butt, write some more! It is a good series, but my internet acsess is limited. I'm not grounded, no, but write some more before I shove a sausage down your throat and stick starving dogs up your butt.
lol |
Reviewed By: Lizzard On: November 24, 2002 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what's gunna happen next. I've rated everything 10 b-cuz you've kept my attention i say thats worth 100. |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 09:15 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* I don't know about italics....
*Yami pingpong* Yes she does.
*pingpong* /Growl/
*Yami PP* I'm scared, oooo.
/pingpong jumps on Yami PP and starts opening a can of whoop-ass/
*yami PP* We both thought it was great! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 12, 2002 18:01 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really good so far. A little depressing, but good. Post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Taure [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 17:40 CST
Comment/Review:
No I don't wanna kill you for making Yugi cry *bah, he cries a lot anyway* I wanna kill you for killing off Mokuba! He's like my... fourth favorite character. Only kidding, i really like this. |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I'm really liking it!! Keep it up and write more!!
-Brockipoo15 PikaRppr1 =)
SETO FOREVER AND HIS VOICE ACTOR! |
Reviewed By: Angelheart On: December 04, 2002 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When will you write that chapter:The Yugi I knew from seto's POV? Update!! Please!! Need you to UPDATE VERY VERY VERY VERY SOON !!!! |
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