| "Fractured" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Great story! Can't wait for the next installment
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2017 04:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic. The plot isn't new, but your take on it is
refreshing and straight to the point. Love how you switched point
of view effortlessly and kept the pace. Hope to see an update soon.
Happy Monday!
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Title: Eagerly awaiting next chapter
Reviewed By: Renee930 On: April 09, 2016 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so eager for the next chapter! Please update soon, I can't wait
to see how Inu reacts when he sees Kagome again - oh and Kikyos
reactions too!!
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Title: Eagerly awaiting next chapter
Reviewed By: Renee930 On: April 09, 2016 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so eager for the next chapter! Please update soon, I can't wait
to see how Inu reacts when he sees Kagome again - oh and Kikyos
reactions too!!
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Title: Eagerly awaiting next chapter
Reviewed By: Renee930 On: April 09, 2016 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so eager for the next chapter! Please update soon, I can't wait
to see how Inu reacts when he sees Kagome again - oh and Kikyos
reactions too!!
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Reviewed By: Enjoli On: April 08, 2016 15:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gahhhhh xD so good! I recently discovered your fanfics (I've read
all of them!) and I must say I'm super impressed!!! I hope Inuyasha
remembers kagome soon! They have such great chemistry! Keep up the
good work!! I look forward to reading again soon!
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2016 14:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first i was like not even, spliting up inuyasha and kagome; but
you kept it on track for inuyasha gradually recalling her. Your
plot is interesting. Im a fan of your other works and just found
this one. Now i can not wait for the next part. Update when you are
able please. Your fan deathlord86
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Reviewed By: EliFanel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2016 21:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyo is sooo dumb in so many ways, like thinking that she can
"win" Inuyasha with such low tricks. hahahaha.. does Inuyashas
demon wake up when he smell Kagome? XD waiting 4ur next update ;)
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Reviewed By: Chelle82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2016 12:43 PST
Comment/Review:
The more I read this story, the more disgusted I am with Kikyo.
What she has done is cruel and heartless. She wants companionship
but doesn't know how to give it. And forcing Inuyasha's hanyou mind
to forget Kagome and all of his friends is just nasty. Will he gain
his memory on the New Moon or if he discards Tessaiga, or meet up
with his brother or even Kagome and the others?
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Reviewed By: Chelle82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2016 04:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm excited to read more!
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