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| "Love is Blind" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: SammyJams On: March 29, 2018 17:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fantastically creative and original story! I enjoyed how
true to character both InuYasha and Kagome were, as well as their
interactions. My only criticism is how sad I am at the somewhat
abrupt ending. I was really hoping to see them eventually meet
Sessh and Toga, and see a little further into their mates life. All
in all, an amazing story! Can’t wait to read
more from you!
| Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Shippolover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2018 20:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was waiting on another great fanfiction and it was delivered!
I’m kind of sad about the lack of story time on
Miroku and Sanyo but the story was amazing nonetheless. I have
mixed feeling about how short it was because I feel like it could
have been added to and made longer and better but Im happy to not
wait for an ending. Great job! And I’m waiting
on the next one!
| Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2018 16:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I figured I'd leave a review over here for a change, since I
read it over here (you know, to get the 'unabridged' version). That
was a nice read. I stayed up later than I should have last night
because I didn't want to stop partway through. The interaction
between them was pretty suspenseful, and even when I felt like I
knew what to expect, you managed to surprise me a bit. I'm really
glad you didn't have her eyesight magically come back immediately;
instead you reflected the fact that the damage was very severe, so
it took time to heal. I also appreciated how it seemed to be a
surprise for them, and not something they thought about or
discussed beforehand. Inuyasha wanted to be with her for centuries
even if she remained blind, and the way you portrayed it left
absolutely no doubt as to that being the case. Miroku and Sango are
funny, in that when I see the word "Miroku" I automatically expect
him to start grab-assing. That would have been out of place in this
story, but I still find it amusing. I'm glad you alluded to his
less than honorable past in passing though. Something would have
felt missing without some reference to Miroku the pervert. I'm sure
we won't have to wait until Halloween for your next story? *nudge
nudge* Looking forward to it, as always.
| Title: The Goddess has returned!!!
Reviewed By: Morambrday04 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2017 21:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Goddess has returned!!! I am so happy To see a new story from
you. It’s been too long, but then again one of
the reasons why I love you is because you post your story in one
shot as opposed to leaving us hanging. I can’t
wait for your next great story!
| Reviewed By: KDH On: December 26, 2017 11:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so thrilled that you are still writing you have no idea how
much your writing means to me you were the first fanfiction I ever
read and that was years ago it's because of your great works of art
that I continue to read fanfiction so now I'm more open-minded to
give things a try I don't only read Inuyasha anymore I've actually
been turned into other story now though nothing will ever compare
to yours, I would love to read more secret santa next year that's
definitely something I would look forward to and anything and
everything that you write is something I look forward to as always
you are a master of your art and everything you create is a work of
art so glad to read this story
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