| "Purity Redux: Anhanguera" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Paola On: February 25, 2018 14:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is dark but beautiful. I can’t wait
to see what happens next! I have been reading your stories since I
don’t know how many years ago. You are so
talented and creative and you have me hooked!! Ps. I really
can’t wait to find out
Diego’s true identity...
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2018 18:35 PST
Comment/Review:
Poor five... watching her master go thru that when he's the best
she's ever known.. I definately had a feeling that Domajin wasn't
gonna allow the other night to happen without some kind of
consequences since he's weirdly in love with Caipora. That last
little bit when he finally broke down and cried... I'm so glad five
hugged him cause I certainly wanted too
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2018 15:48 PST
Comment/Review:
Holy shit. Talk about a massive orgy lol and that's what you were
talking about, twincest for. Makes more sense now lol what was up
with that agent with the weird wrist attack thing? We will have to
wait and see... and oh great, just what five didn't need to see...
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Title: Mind blowing!!!!
Reviewed By: AvinPhi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2018 11:01 PST
Comment/Review:
I officially love Five. What was that, with the agent of Eduardo?
Well, I guess I'll just have to wait... I loved the chapter. Long
and full
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2018 20:31 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm really hoping Domajin doesn't find out about 5. I really think
Caipora would kill him if he did something terrible to her. Maybe
that's the line. He didn't break this time, no one's pet indeed
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Reviewed By: Emy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2018 10:37 PST
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit! I am so nervous for what
Domajin will do next.. Will he find out about Caipora's special
relationship with 5? Or will he continue to torture Caipora until
the last of his sanity breaks. You have created a narrative from a
difficullt perspective and I appreciate it ^-^
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2018 20:07 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm definately having mixed emotions about Anhanguera after this
chapter. Declare open season on him.. That's not gonna be good
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2018 14:09 PST
Comment/Review:
God damn! I've smoked 3 cigarettes during this chapter lol that
poor hunter.. I feel like we just barely reached the opening
ceremony of this meeting. Feels like more hawtness to come
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Reviewed By: MiReinaPura On: February 05, 2018 22:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I... I can't even... Just one word, "Damn"...
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2018 21:02 PST
Comment/Review:
I like how we get to call her 5 in chapter 5 lol funny how that
worked out lol A nice soak is always good for the soul. I hope that
the slave thay got free.. stayed free. I wonder if they hunt down
the freed ones to get sold of again
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2018 20:46 PST
Comment/Review:
Bless that sweet little girl for being able to help him after all
of that. To think how many nights he had to do it all by himself
after all that... That meeting doesn't sound like it's gonna be
good at all. It might get him closer to finding the information or
evidence he needs but... chances are, bad things will happen.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2018 19:08 PST
Comment/Review:
Maybe this little girl is his way to get out. Saving her may help
save him? There's something about her that's special to him, that
makes her different from all the other girls. Curious.. Caipora
literally fucked that man up. He certainly makes damn sure that
wasn't gonna happen again. Fool me once..
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2018 18:39 PST
Comment/Review:
Fuck. I mean.. how do you live with yourself after you get out of
that life, even if it all was for the greater good in the end. I
couldn't do that. You know whatever the reason he had for doing
this.. is a damn good one. I couldn't. Caipora is definately a
curious thing indeed
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Gin_Hayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2018 15:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEE!!!! You put up chapter 2!!! There has to be something awful
for a youkai (who isnt evil) to have anything to do with someone
elses mate. Thats some terrible stuff to have to do just to not get
killed yourself, and probably worse than Franco.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2018 20:26 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh my! 8 years in that kind of under cover operations.. he has
definately seen some shit. The Virgin House is curious... A good
start Sue! Let's see where this takes us
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