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| "Beautiful Stranger" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: OceansDawn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2018 17:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
I like the story. It's imaginative and gives a strong female role
with splashes of humor. The end feels like it's an epilogue. It
closes the story nicely but really doesn't need to be so many
chapters. It would have been fun to have a few more "minute by
minute" moments with I/K. Maybe a bit more drama in somewhere. I
appreciate the theam of anti-racism, very strong opinion on that.
It's also something people don't think about. Viewing it as an
established social thing rather than seeing it for what it is. Some
just assume that because social norms say it's ok than it is. But
that doesn't mean that it is or that you have to follow. Great
peice!
| Title: Welcome back
Reviewed By: Morambrday04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2018 00:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hello Goddess, I am so happy to see a new story from you (you have
NO idea...hehehe). As always, this story is SPECTACULAR!!! Here I
am, at 3:40 in the morning, writing you this review because I could
not put the story down! You have such a way of portraying the
characters just right, and I love it! I hope we
don’t have to wait till Halloween for another
SpledentGoddess Special! Keep up the great work! Many hugs!!!
| Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2018 09:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Glad to see that you got one of your many ideas published.
This was an enjoyable read. Inuyasha is a sympathetic figure, but
as you said, at least he has lots of money and one true friend. We
don't feel bad for Kagome, but we immediately like her because
she's strong and doesn't take shit from anybody. I am glad you
included the parts about the prejudice and hanyou biology so there
are some drawbacks to being with Inuyasha, something which she has
to like/love him enough to overcome. I'm also glad you did the last
chapter as more of a summary, and ended it where you did. We the
readers don't need every story taken to the "til death to us part"
phase. I honestly would have been fine with a "we're dating now,
let's see where life takes us" type of ending, but I absolutely
don't mind getting more details either.
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