| "A Purity Short: Cacophony" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: gahaynes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2020 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. So sweet. I'm glad they finally realized what
the readers knew. Thanks for updating and things will get better.
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Title: YAS
Reviewed By: Emy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2020 15:43 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating Sue! I've been waiting for this chapter ^-^
Kelly and Cartham are just too cute. I really like that he revealed
his name to her and only her. It felt really intimate and right.
Looking forward to the next updates on stories whenever you can!
Excellent chapter
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Reviewed By: DiamondRo5e On: September 24, 2019 17:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When will the next chapter be uploaded?
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Clever Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2019 20:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So in love with this story! I love how Cartham is slowly coming out
of his shell while tearing down her walls. Again, I can't wait for
the next chapter. Keep up the brilliance in your brain!
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Reviewed By: Clever Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2019 00:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter! Thank you! Can't wait until the next one!
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Reviewed By: Clever Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2019 00:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter! Thank you! Can't wait until the next one!
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Reviewed By: Mygrayhare [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2019 19:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to see the notification of this new short story. I
love the Purity series. All the hard work and research you do for
your stories is why I love them. Please keep up the great work.
P.S. I hope this inspires you to finish their
daughter’s
story (hint hint)
ðŸ˜Å
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Reviewed By: Clever Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2019 23:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! And so it begins! Love the new story. Can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Clever Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2019 23:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! And so it begins! Love the new story. Can't wait to read more
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: Laura On: June 21, 2019 20:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love love LOVE another Purity! I always loved your depth or
characters. Cartham and Kelly are characters we already know and
love but now we can see the start.
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: Laura On: June 21, 2019 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love love LOVE another Purity! I always loved your depth or
characters. Cartham and Kelly are characters we already know and
love but now we can see the start.
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Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2019 19:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can’t wait to read more about Cartham and
Kelly. I love the Purity stories. You are such a great writer and
they take me away from all the stress I have in my life. Thank you.
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Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2019 19:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can’t wait to read more about Cartham and
Kelly. I love the Purity stories. You are such a great writer and
they take me away from all the stress I have in my life. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Lacy On: June 20, 2019 19:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the vivid characterizations! Can’t waiy
to find out more about Kelly and Cartham.
Kelly’s parents seem kind of negligent but
that’s just a first opinion. Always enjoy your
writing style!
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