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"When My Heart Shatters" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ]
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 Reviewed By: taia  On: April 01, 2021 22:00 PDT
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sesshomaru's beast is getting stronger by the second! i wonder if he will one day get strong enough to separate from sesshomaru to be with kagome and their child? or will he eventually take full control over sesshomaru instead?
 Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Guest  On: April 01, 2021 21:51 PDT
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Awesome chapter!
 Reviewed By: taia  On: March 26, 2021 11:59 PDT
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sango may or may not harm her unborn child... but if she does plan to keep it, is she going to lie and say that it is sesshomaru's? and what about the other person she was sleeping with? will they meet her again and interfere with her plans?
 Reviewed By: Guest  On: March 26, 2021 11:54 PDT
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(Sighs) Sango, you are definitely a lost cause right now.
 Reviewed By: Kasey  On: March 26, 2021 11:46 PDT
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Your story is spectacular!!
 Reviewed By: Brigthena  On: March 26, 2021 11:33 PDT
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Sango... this is going to end very badly for you should Sesshomaru and the other Yokai's ever discover the truth about your pregnancy. Especially Sesshomaru's beast... who is protective, loving and loyal to his mate, Kagome. [And please take your time, dear author. We understand how jobs can take a lot of our time and energy.]
 Reviewed By: Hinota  On: March 26, 2021 11:11 PDT
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Don't worry, we all understand how jobs can keep one busy! Especially when you are also training on the job.
 Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Guest  On: March 26, 2021 10:56 PDT
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Whoa... Sango was seeing someone else behind Sesshomaru's back and is pregnant with their child. And now, she is going pass the child off as Sess's. Mind-blowing... absolutely mind-blowing!😲
 Reviewed By: Guest  On: March 26, 2021 10:35 PDT
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I'm glad that you aren't giving up on this amazing story. It is really captivating!
 Reviewed By: Hinota  On: March 04, 2021 16:03 PST
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Sesshomaru's beast is rebelling against him. And I wonder, with all of the drama going on between him, Sango and Kagome, if he will break loose from him and create his own human form just to be with his mate (Kagome)?
 Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Guest  On: March 04, 2021 13:52 PST
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"But you are happy that their relationship is destroyed."
 Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Guest  On: March 04, 2021 13:50 PST
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Whaaaattt??? Sango is pregnant too?? 😲 This is definitely going to complicate Sesshomaru's plans to fix his relationship with his wife. And Sango, how could you? I thought that you would have felt a little sad & ashamed for what you have done to Kagome and Sesshomaru, but you are happy that their relationship- all because you wanted to have Sesshomaru for your own. I am definitely foreseeing a huge downfall for Sango because of her behavior and actions.
 Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Guest  On: March 04, 2021 13:29 PST
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Kagome... you will be happy again. The path will be long and hard, but you will be happy again.
 Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Guest  On: March 04, 2021 13:25 PST
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Even thought Inuyasha wanted his sister-in-law and future niece/nephew to stay with him and Kikyo.... he chose to protect them by sending them away you. Inuyasha, you are the best brother figure ever! ❤
 Reviewed By: Brigthena  On: March 04, 2021 13:18 PST
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Sesshomaru, while I'm glad that you are realizing that your affair was a mistake... it is a little too late for that. You have already hurt your mate and broke her heart. It will be very hard to regain the trust you once had with your wife. It would also be very hard for Kagome to look at you the same way she once did. And even if you stayed faithful from now, she was always think that you are cheating her because of what happened between you and Sango. The best choice for you now is to let her go and give her time to heal her broken heart.
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