| "The Truth" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: October 16, 2002 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful chapter. I love the fact that Goten and Trunks have reunited again. Sadly, Pan moved on and she's with someone else, but Trunks has his daughter and that's the most important thing. Also, he's optimistic about the future and what it will bring. I only wish that you could put up another chap. Yeah I know you said this is THE END, but I would've loved to have seen Trunks reconcile with his family. Whatever you decide to do won't take away the fact that this story was simply superb, absolutely fantastic! I hope you're proud of yourself. BRAVO HC!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 16, 2002 05:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...his daughter, she was his daughter! Oh I'm cying...that was so beautiful. What a reunion. Wow! Oh and the article that she wrote, was simply beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. I can't say enough about this chap, so I'll just shut up and read the last one. Wow!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 16, 2002 05:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Shitonastick!! So all this time he was giving his interview from prison...how sad. I can't believe I have tears in my eyes. I mean you'd want something like this to happen to a rapist, but not someone who was in love and it was all consentual. I mean, he's never even seen his daughter, or Pan and everyone disowned him. You know it had to hurt that even his own family wanted nothing to do with him. I'm so f*cking depressed now *sigh*. Oh yeah, even though this chap is incredibly sad it was excellent. Now I think I'll go and drown myself in another cup of coffee *sniff* :(. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 16, 2002 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I knew that was coming, but unlike other T/P fics theres obviously gonna be some major angst going on. I love how you've put a touch of realism into this. I mean heres a 15 y/o involved with a older man and she's just found out that she's pregnant. I feel so sorry for her cause I've seen this happen in real life and the emotional devastation that followed. Great chap HC! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 16, 2002 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so things have gotten "physical" between T/P. I'm kinda starting to get the picture, but instead of sticking my foot in my mouth I think I'll just continue reading. Oh yeah, good chap ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 16, 2002 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well damn, this has definitely got my attention, and it's only the first chap! JB recommended this fic and said that of your stories this is her fave (I gotta remember to thank her ^_^). Ok, so Trunks is obviously spilling his guts out and I can't wait to find out who he's confessing everything to. I guess I better stop the babbling and move on. Good chap :D. |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AIYA!!!! MORE!!!!! MORE!!!! MORE!!!!!!
Dude. You still have to like, tell about his reunion with his family! Like, Bulma and Vegeta and Bra! DUDE! Come ON! I'm more awesome than thirty people! So since I say so, you need to do it! |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: September 30, 2002 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a killer ending...i didn't see that coming |
Reviewed By: Megami Shine [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2002 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
*cries* that was beautiful, really. u kno i loved it! n i just can't help but say...I win! lol |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew it!! I love Trunks to pieces but I kind of wish they'd let Gohan have a crack at him. Just one, that's all I ask. Awwww...Goten doesn't have any hard feelings. That's so like him and it's the main reason I love him so much. You know only one thing surprised me about this chapter. The Briefs. How could Bulma and Vegeta just disown their first born like that?! That really, really sucks. Isn't a parent suppose to love their kid unconditionally? *shrugs* I guess that's just me. Is the reporter his daughter? I mean you said she had blue eyes all but I guess blue eyes could mean anybody. Oh well- WAIT! MAYBE one more chapter?! WHAT?! You mean it's almost over!!! Noooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't say it's so. You have to continue! Okay maybe you don't HAVE to continue but I'll die if you don't...-JB |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god!! I think that's the best writing you've EVER done! My heart's trying to calm down from all the pounding! And I almost cried!! I don't know if it's just been an emotional day or if it was truly you're writing, but you KNOW I hardly ever cry unless I just can't help it. Good... no... AMAZING job chica! I can't wait for you to update again!! |
Reviewed By: FloralBlackMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BITCH! YOU BETTER FUCKING UPDATE!!! I AIN'T PLAYIN'!!! YOU BETTER FUCKIN' UPDATE THIS FUCKIN' GOOD SHIT!!!! GODDAMN THIS IS ORGINAL!!! PLEASE TELL ME WHO IT WAS!!!! PLEASE AND PUT ME ON YOUR MALING LIST!!! MY E-MAIL IS "spicywhitestar@hotmail.com"
UPDATE!! |
Reviewed By: Megami Shine [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 16:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
i win i win it's HER i kno i kno n u kno it too lol more soon Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahh!
That was... that was... his daughter!
YAY!
Wow...
I chi wowah!
*sniff* So beautiful...
Seriously. This was very believable and very realistic and awesome and all that. *applause* |
Reviewed By: Gravy On: September 11, 2002 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good fan fic. The writing style was perfect for the mood. The grammar was nearly flawless. It was a very different side to a t/p fic, I must say. However, one little thing irked me. The age of sexual concent is very low in Japan. 13 I believe. (Pan at 16, regardless would have been fine. It's no higher than 16, I'm sure of that.) Though the overall general idea of the story is just great! Keep up the great work.
~Gravy |
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