Reviewed By: AirinDesu On: July 24, 2025 22:42 PDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is great. Charlotte is such a perfect villainess in this
piece. I love that you included little instances throughout where
the good in her came through. Loved the gradual descent into
submissive slave that Nikki was put through. From her defiance
along the way to her decisive acceptance at the end, all of it was
written beautifully. I also really enjoyed all the allusions to how
the Divas and Womens Divisions of WWF/WWE have been perceived over
the years. Nikki literally eating Charlotte's excrement off of the
Diva's Championship to show she wasn't ashamed of it and all it is
perceived to represent was an incredibly powerful scene. Would love
to see more of this pairing with this specific dynamic from you
someday.
