| "Shared Wishes, Shared Lives" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: September 03, 2003 22:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is this a repost? Doesn't seem to be a new chapter. Anyway, it gives me a chance to request once again -- please don't make this Ranma/Akane. Having re-read the chapter I see that Akane knows about Ryouga's curse. How can she be suited? Both of the other sisters get heartbroken and Ranma ends up with someone who betrayed him to maintain the standard matchup? Say it ain't so! |
Reviewed By: Lord Raa On: September 03, 2003 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked this fic, I would like to see more of it. |
Reviewed By: Terryie On: August 01, 2003 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Ranma being rescued for a change, and not becoming a god or goddess when crossed with the Norns. A maternalistic Urd, definitely a change in perspective. Sharing memories sure is a quick way to civilize Ranma, nice touch (did he learn any spells?). To join the schools it is really only necessary that Ranma teach his half to a Tendo and that he learn the Tendo school.
Please not another Akane and Ranma match. If she knows of Ryogo's curse and he still sleeps in her room then I think her honour is non-reclaimable. |
Reviewed By: Sterling_Ag On: July 05, 2003 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has been a joy to read. However, I tend to agree with some of the other reviewers. Akane/Ranma pairings are way to common in fanfics. I'm not against them. I think if she matured some (as well as Ranma) they could make a great couple. But it's been done to death before. I wouldn't mind seeing an alternate match up. Preferably one out of the blue that no one saw coming. Those can be fun if written believably. I personally believe that Skuld or Bell would be a good bet for a match-up. But you know in the end it's your fic. Go with what feels right with you. This is just an opinion I have. I'm sure I'll continue to read and enjoy this story regardless of the end match-up. |
Reviewed By: Dragonheart7373 On: July 02, 2003 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story all the way untill I seen that you want to make this story another Akane/Ranma fic. Please reconsider this paring because there are WAY too many fics with them as a couple.
That doesn't mean that I won't stop reading this story but the coupling needs to be change because from what I've seen in the past chapters she doesn't deserve to be with him. |
Reviewed By: Dragonheart7373 On: July 02, 2003 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story all the way untill I seen that you want to make this story another Akane/Ranma fic. Please reconsider this paring because there are WAY too many fics with them as a couple.
That doesn't mean that I won't stop reading this story but the coupling needs to be change because from what I've seen in the past chapters she doesn't deserve to be with him. |
Reviewed By: uten On: July 01, 2003 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting fic so far..
The only thing I hope you reconsider is the actual pairing of Ranma and Akane.. I'm not against a Ranma and Akane pairing, but the way you have portrayed the characters so far doesn't fit with that.
Kasumi, the goddesses, Ukyo and even Nabiki have been shown to have some GREAT redeeming features which would interest Ranma even BEFORE they shared memories. Genma realised he was hurting his child, he was just caught up in his dream. Akane on the other hand is even worse than her Anime version. She KNOWS what she's doing. And she thinks it's her right to do that. She doesn't seem to care at all. She's a petty minded little sadist. At least, that's what I'm getting from the story so far.
I can't see a believable way that Ranma could actually choose her after the way she's been acting so far. Sure, I think he could like her as a friend again, but trust and love??? She has not a single bit of either in her..
IF you can actually pull it off in a believable fashion, it'll make a great story. But, considering her actions so far, I can't see it.
I do look forward to new chapters, regardless.. |
Reviewed By: Sterling_Ag On: July 01, 2003 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very fun and enjoyable fic. I hope to see more of it soon. Thanks. |
Reviewed By: Chi Vanye On: July 01, 2003 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great that you have picked this up again. I hope you reconsider your note "In the end, it's intended to be a Ranma/Akane". I have no objection in general to that pairing, but the way the story has gone so far seems in total contradiction to that matchup. Both Kasumi and Nabiki are in love with him, treat him better, and are more emotionally compatible. The Ranma in canon is by all means a jerk, but yours is not while your Akane is borderline psychotic. Why not let him get a nice girl and be happy? |
Reviewed By: Reiko D-Wolf On: June 15, 2003 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has very interesting plot, it'svery interesting to read. From what I know, it's hard to wright such crossovers.And yours is very breathtakeing (and thats not common in our days) |
Reviewed By: Lord Rance On: April 12, 2003 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the ideas on how the author explained Ranma's various weird circumstances. That and also the way the author swiveled Ranma into Belldandy's world. |
Reviewed By: Mr. Allen On: March 15, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good plot, very original. |
Reviewed By: Rob On: March 12, 2003 07:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a very good storie in which I lost myself for some time.
It has a very good plot and nice subplots.
The characters are very well put together, and there is a reason given for when they are ooc.
I hope the author posts new chapters soon |
Reviewed By: Sheen On: January 25, 2003 21:10 CST
Comment/Review:
very very cool. please update soon. wanna see more. |
Reviewed By: Backstein On: January 03, 2003 14:24 CST
Comment/Review:
not much to say here, I like it please update soon. |
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