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"The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Amy the Yu  On: January 04, 2003 16:33 CST
Comment/Review:
PWAHAHAHAHA!!!!

I just feel so sorry for Ken, but I doubt he really disliked standing there seeing his teammates naked and *cough* going at it. I know I wouldn't dislike it...then again, I don't work with them. ^_^

Good story. I almost wish it was a sequel to Violet Eyes. I really wanted to find out how the loose ends were handled...like how Teddy dealt with the death of his b/f or how Aya ended his job there.

Not going to go off topic, not going to go off topic (I have a litany too see ^_^) DAMN, I'm going off topic. Not going to go off topic, not going to go off topic...

This was a funny ficcie. Sakura has a thick scull...=P to the girl.

PEACE OUT =)
 Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 16, 2002 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well speaking of giving and taking. Seem as if Youji is trying to join Aya in his hobbies. Good story. Especially that teasing.

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