| "Controlling Lies, Painful Truths" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elbereth in April [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy oh boy oh boy what fun!
Now Bulma has to begin to understand his hidden secrets. (I have been reading too much angst.)
I liked very much, it was very good. A great overflowing of happiness comes upon me whenever you update. So make me happy again. :) |
Reviewed By: vinn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2002 03:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luuuvvvv this fic
so please keep writing cause it is really really good splendivouris even (lol) |
Reviewed By: Princess Vegeta On: October 07, 2002 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update it's really really good!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dragon Flames On: October 07, 2002 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jack Bauer fan On: September 30, 2002 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on i can't take the waiting please post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: storm On: September 27, 2002 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool, please write more soon |
Reviewed By: red dragon On: September 26, 2002 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good you have to update soon! |
Reviewed By: Wolf lover On: September 26, 2002 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very well wrote and i can't wait to read more. can you please update today it would be the best thing ever please i beg you!!!.......sorry lol i just can't wait to find out what happens. |
Reviewed By: elbereth in april On: September 26, 2002 12:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Still good. Let's have him hallucinate some very personal emotional things, just so Bulma can watch. Hmmm...maybe I've been reading too much angst lately? |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: September 26, 2002 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa this is realy good, great story so far. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: No Name On: September 25, 2002 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW THIS IS GREAT PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON |
Reviewed By: Newfie On: September 25, 2002 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it's sooooooooooo good please write more soon. |
Reviewed By: louie On: September 18, 2002 14:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!WOW This fic is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Crimson On: September 18, 2002 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Elbereth in April On: September 18, 2002 10:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
So far, I like! You write well. I hate all my own titles, so I'm afraid I can't help you there. But anyway, keep going with this and your other story. |
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