| "The Walls Between" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: =^_^= On: March 24, 2004 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
its been 2 years since i've first read this fic...and i still keep comming back for more...it still remains my favorite fic...awesome job~!
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Reviewed By: Ridertz On: January 09, 2004 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoyed it, read story with 1 break in between. A tad too much lemon thoughout whole story though, but was okay.
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Reviewed By: neon On: June 15, 2003 15:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Even though people complain about the ending..i still loved it. All your stories are pretty dark, and that is the kind of stories i usually go for. I felt bad for daisuke, but i felt more bad for ken. Daisuke kinda irritated me...after he KNEW that ken needed him and that he was the center of his world, how could he leave him like that? One of my buddies complained that your stories are too dark and twisted, but who cares right? that is what makes me want to read it. I hope you can repost some of the stories you had on FF.net...I really didnt get to read them before they got deleted. |
Reviewed By: Hurt Pride On: February 16, 2003 22:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic. You're horrible, HORRIBLE, you hear me, Kin-sama? I don't know why I keep reading this fic, but this is the third time I have. (Not standing up to my five studious readings of Mistakes.) The first time I read the end of Walls, I cried like a baby. You're *awful*! But, so, sooo fabulous. Ugh. You have me contradicting myself left and right. I hate that ending, I HATE it, but I wouldn't of ended it any other way. Perfection. Simply perfection. Each word, each sentence, each subtle little adjective creates an amazing affect that leaves insane critic fangirls like myself drooling all over you. Ugggh. How *dare* you, sir? How dare you? xD Excellent. It's awesome. Phenomenal. And I still think you should die for it. -- HP |
Reviewed By: Kelleth On: December 10, 2002 18:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods, Kinslayer. I never get tired of your fics. I actually don't read them for the lemon (really!) but instead for the characterization, which is brilliant. It's especially chilling to read in a fanfic things that I've gone through myself at the end of a loving relationship...that disturbing feeling of something just being *wrong*, and having to end it. I'm also a big fan of unhappy endings. It's much more realistic that way. Anyhow, keep on trucking, or shipping, or whatever. You've got at least one devoted reader you can count on. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sairisu On: December 02, 2002 21:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another one of my favs... You are god, aren't you? oO; Hee. ^^; Never let this go, I'd kill to have talent like yours. *flashes butcher knife at a random person* |
Reviewed By: Samara On: November 24, 2002 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I understand that a lot of people here think this is a bad ending. I *love* it. You see so many fanfics about people getting together, and not so many about the end of a relationship. Plus, Daisuke escaped the codependency, which I approve of mightily. This ended the only way it could if one of the couple was, well, sane. I myself find it to be an uplifting ending, because bad relationships suck like little else and Daisuke ended it.
On the other had, Ken gets shafted. While this does leave him with the opportunity for growth, it's not too likely that he'll let Dai go. That part *is* sad, but probably realistic. |
Reviewed By: AshenKoneko On: November 17, 2002 13:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dies* that's so mean~~~ not allowed to have a happy ending? Poor Ken *huggles Ken* |
Reviewed By: Phantasm On: June 02, 2003 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing no matter how many times I read it. Loved the ending. I cried the first time I read it, but loved the ending. |
Reviewed By: Empress of the Eclipse [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 17:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only nine for enjoyment. For me it is tainted by the predictions of "Oh God no, this can't end happily".
Well, you've had everything about this one already from me. I don't think I can actually type it all again! Let me just say that this fic is STILL fabulous even when re-read, the lemon is as always highly lovely and erotic *grin* and the emotions are beautifully captured. You need to write something new now - I need some more incredible fanfictions!
Oh and ignore the reviews which critise the ending. Personally, I think the ending is one of the best parts. They could NEVER have been happy together and I think that it was the best thing for them both in the end.
Will you ever write a HAPPY Kensuke/Daiken? A challenge from me, write a HAPPY Kensuke/Daiken and post it! Ah, go on! Please? |
Reviewed By: Mae On: October 06, 2002 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT iS WITH THE ENDING OF THIS FICTION!? not only is it with out explaination but how can you break ken's heart like that. The whole fic is so wonderful until that last part. it ruins the entire thing. |
Reviewed By: =^_^= On: October 05, 2002 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing .. i loved it~!! |
Reviewed By: sexy diva girl On: September 21, 2002 14:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiidont ;like it |
Reviewed By: DarkSakura [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2002 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant fic. This never is boring to read, no matter how many times I do. |
Reviewed By: Taichi Ishida [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2002 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm wanton, sexy Daisuke...and a wicked Ken.
part of me's screaming OMG that was sick.
But...I must admit *drool* it's a very tasty prospect.
Yeah. I've read the entire thing already. ^^ but that last scene between ken and dais never gets old. |
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