| "Zoids: Ultimate Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Teko Man [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 13:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
No your not annoying, and I live in Bakersfield, California |
Reviewed By: thunderfox On: October 19, 2002 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to write more am i annoying send me a response. Two more questions where do you live i live in Licoln, Nebraska |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura The King [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 09:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
i kno that, but u had him being corrupted by raven's genes and dont say anything else about it. I wanna kno what happens! ok...this is not a story about vega, but still it is pretty good |
Reviewed By: Teko Man [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
calm down, this story isn't all about Vega |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura The King [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 15:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Where'd Vega go??? We have him being corrupted thenhe disappears for like 2 chapters??? :(
pretty good job. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura The King [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 17:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
ya i see...2 solo teams? Thats it? Vega and Bit are the only solo pilots, wow. A 12 or 13 yr. old that is being corrupted by the genes of an old releative( Raven DUUHHH) and a 17 or 18(i think)just-gone-solo pilot. Kewl
Nice work. The chapter was a lil short tho. |
Reviewed By: Teko Man [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 17:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
oIm Noy really gonna explain this in future chapters, but ill explain it here. Well Vega is related to Raven(Its pretty obvious). Raven was evil, and vega was a carefree kid.So Vega did have evil features but were never awakened. After his fight with Bit and the Liger 0, Some anger grew inside of him, The other reasons will come up soon, but u have to pay attention |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King On: October 04, 2002 09:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I dun really like the corruption part. the battle was good, but i didnt really get/understand/like the Vega Corruption part,are you gonna expain what happened? ARe you gonna explian some stuf about how it happened |
Reviewed By: Teko Man [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
forget what i said, my fan fic seems to be up and running properly |
Reviewed By: Teko Man [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Im gona have to delete this fan fic since theres a glitch in MediaMiner, After this story is deleted, I'll post up the same story, it should take me a few minutes to post chapters 1-8, so no prob |
Reviewed By: thunderfox On: September 24, 2002 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make more chapters! great story send me a response as soon as you can.make a exciting part like when Bit visits the Blitz team make Leena really excited |
Reviewed By: Teko Man [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2002 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
dont worry about the relatioship with Bit and Leena, i aint saying anything right now,but this story is FAR from over, im not even at the exciting part |
Reviewed By: thunderfox On: September 23, 2002 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In the next chapter can you make Leena really sad excellent story |
Reviewed By: thunderfox On: September 22, 2002 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Leena seemed sad that Bit was leaving the Blitz team.Keep on writing i love your story. |
Reviewed By: thunderfox On: September 21, 2002 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought there was gonna be Bit and Leena romance anyway this story is great keep writing
pllleeeeeaaaaassseeeee. |
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