| "Zana-sei" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sakura On: April 06, 2003 19:14 CDT
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I loved it so far. It's kind of funny. But still good. |
Reviewed By: bura400 On: April 06, 2003 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snickers* THis is getting really good! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 16:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great! I really wanna see the lemon next! Please update!!1 |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughing so hard that her mother's broken ribs hurt* I still can't get over it... the GREAT Saiyan no Ouji ... FAINTED!!!!!!!!!!
*blinks* No guys are allowed to read this chapter. *ponders* Or should we make it required reading? *lol*
*claps hands vigorously* I can't WAIT to here Vegeta's reaction!! "Yeah, let's make a baby *winkwink*" *lmao* As if. More like "You think YOU'RE worthy of MY sperm!?!?" *LOL* I need to stop daydreaming before I kill myself from laughter. o.O
*finishes reading the IY snippet* WRITE that, NOW!! j/k Seriously, I love reading Inuyasha fanfiction and if it's as good as this story is, then HELL yeah, I'm there and reading it already!! (Could you tell me when you do post it? I'd LOVE to read it! :)
*shudders and remembers the HUGE ass spider she killed today* EWWWWwwwww, spiders... O.O |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ONE WORD UPDATE! JA NE! |
Reviewed By: Drag.zfan On: March 04, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! It's good to be back. Been a long time keep it real. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 09:57 CDT
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OH my god! That was hilarious. Make that thing work! Hahahaha! update soon! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 09:27 CST
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Err, you ended it there?! Update soon. I love this story. |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are going in a good direction with this fic. Ive never really read anything remotely similliar to it. Ive got to give you major points for creativity. I think that Bulma is sweet in this fic, its sad that she has to have the dreams of what Vegeta's life is really like. I am still wondering how people like Bulmas mother got pregnant, or did i miss that somewhere? If you could explain that, it would be appreciated. I feel sorry for Radditz and them, poor victims of the dominatrix lady ^^ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*snickers* Typical. I think that's how ALL men react to a woman giving birth. ;) Uhh...that WAS what happened, right?
Oh yeah, I liked this part:
"The oddest feature on her, and all the rest of the women, were the small bat wings that came out of the sides of her head."
Wings? Morrigan?
"I am Queen Morrigan."
*ROFLMFAO* Holyshit I got it RIGHT!!
Neat chapter ... I think it's hilarious that Radditz and Co are stuck on anOTHER female dominated planet. *heh* ...but they WILL escape and eventually get to Buruma's planet, right? Kakkarot's still got to meet ChiChi ... and Radditz needs a woman too! (and even Nappa shouldn't be ... left in the cold;)
Well I was sorry to hear about your month(or so). Word was completely GONE!?!? Whoa... *lol* Here's another funny one... my computer's dead(pretty much) so I have to use my mom's laptop. And today ... she almost sold it out from under me!! O.O *lmao* No, she didn't, so I can still write. (not that anyone cares, heh ;)
Keep writing! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 20:17 CST
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lol, Vegeta in this chapter is, dare i say, cute! Squabbling about his bed. I dont think is going to throw her off tho. *wink* |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 19:58 CST
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Hahaha, Vegeta is flat chested! ^^ Im sorry, Bulma is just so innocently funny. Im loving your writing style. |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 19:52 CST
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Wow, very cool. Its sort of odd seeing Bulma as a native person rather than a scientist. But, as talented as you are, you pull it off well. |
Reviewed By: izazel On: February 19, 2003 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the update is taking longer than it should why such a wait for such a promising epic it apears to have great potential |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it please update ASAP!!!
cuttie_blossom |
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