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"Kotahitanga / The Return" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ]
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 Reviewed By: stina-chan  On: October 23, 2002 14:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey yo,
now i really can take a kitten off your hands....
if you give me a kitten i'll name it bagira....cliche but oh so shibby.....
mmmm......peachy goodness.... dripping down my chin....

*wipe*

that was wierd....

stina-chan, keep writing parts everyone
 Reviewed By: Deathdroid  On: October 20, 2002 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Coolio!! Im gonna risk pain and say it was spiffy!! *puts on helmet* I don't like frying pans no more.. Cool, another gundam wing fan in the return, I want to see Duo, or perhaps a female version of Duo.. ^_~
 Reviewed By: BananaGirl  On: October 19, 2002 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dude, very angsty! Poor Tobias and J'dee *sniffles* Now this is what I call drama. The closest my pieces get to drama is painting bedrooms and taking Skittles underwear. Mmmmm, I wonder if he's got some new ones.

Quorky: I'd hope so. Then again, he looks like the type who changes his underwear once a month.

Nah, most of the time he goes Commando. Remember, he told me?

Quorky: Thanks, I'd managed to forget that. Until now.

No prob ^^ I could never forget that!
 Reviewed By: stina-chan  On: October 19, 2002 05:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol
can i have a kitten, cute little furballs, and i'd name it ratpack just for the sake of calling it rat......okay that didn't have much to do with anything but i'm legaly and insomniac now seeing that its 4:17 am, creepy i need sleep...and food....so i'm going to go now, go everyone since i'm too much of a chicken shit to join...
stina-chan
 Reviewed By: Jeril Dragonsoul  On: October 18, 2002 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
MUWHAHAHAHAHA!!! Now it's my turn!! This will be the most spiffiest party in the history of ANBM!!! *laughs maniacally*
Great pieces everyone!! Tobias, J'dee, Mabelle! Your pieces are so charged with emotion!! You're doing a great job!! Keep it up!!
Author powers back?? OH THANK YOU KAMI! I LOVE YOU, MAN!! YOU ARE THE BEST GOD IN THE UNIVERSE!!
 Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess TRF [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 16, 2002 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Angst. Lots of angst...I almost cried. Well, it was good though. It takes a lot to make me wanna cry, so great job! Woah...this review is GAY! *clenches head* Sorry for this really REALLY bad review!
 Reviewed By: DigitalAvatar [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 16, 2002 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heh, it seems I've joined the mass exodus from fanfiction.net, and followed y'all here :)
ANBM rocked, and already the sequel is shaping up to be twice as good!
I wish you all luck and adventure in the DBZ/GT world, wish I were there! ;)
 Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess TRF [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 16, 2002 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yahoooo!!! Chapter 2 is out! Great job again, the text wasn't your fault. I, for one, could still read it so I have no reason to complain. I got lots of new ideas for the sequel...mwhahahahahaha!!! *cackles*

Heero: *whacks her with a lead pipe* Shut up.

*falls to the ground* Look at all the pretty stars...and birdies, hi birdies! And Vegetas and Juunanagous...oooooh!!! Hit me again Heero!

Heero: *smirk* What ever you say *whacks her a few more times*

YAY!!! LOOK AT ALL THE VEGETAS AND JUUNANAGOUS! DON'T YOU SEE THEM EVERYONE?! THEY'RE ALL SO KAWAII!!! *Tries to grab them, but her hands go right through them* Huh?! Whuz the deal?
 Reviewed By: Jeril Dragonsoul  On: October 15, 2002 09:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
WEEEEEEEEE'RRRRRRRRRRRRRE BAAAAAAAACK!!! *grins* This is gonna be fun!!! Very... *evil grin* And this time, I'm gonna to keep writing and not drop out!!! Time to scare Veggie-chan!! Muwhahahahahaha- *gets whacked on the head* Ouch!! *rubs the large lump* Hey! That wasn't nice!!
Oooooo!! Chibi Veggie's now gonna be Teen Veggie!! *big dreamy anime eyes* This is gonna be a lot of fun... hehehehe...
 Reviewed By: DeathStorm [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 10, 2002 18:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
What're yousa and Toby gonna think?! NNNNNNOOOOOOOO! MUST BE MORE SOON! YOU PEOPLES GET YOUR PEICES IN CAUSE MESA WANNA RRREEEEEEAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDD MMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! ::Growls visciously::... ^^ Have a nice day!

YLG,
DS
 Reviewed By: Eternity  On: October 09, 2002 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This happened faster than I ever could've hoped for *grins* Marvelous work on the prologue! Chapter one is a promise of great things to come. I can't wait to see what happens this time around. I'm working on my first piece as quickly as I can.
 Reviewed By: BananaGirl  On: October 09, 2002 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Chappie 1 is out, and boy was it a good chappie! Can't wait til I go back, Mission Seduce Skittles will definitely prevail!

Quorky: Do you think Mission Seduce Bulma will work?

Grrrrr, why'd you wanna seduce HER??!!

Quorky: Because she's intelligent, witty, beautiful, kind, helpful, fiery and opinionated

We ARE talking about blue-hair, aren't we?

Quorky: Oh haha, very humourous.

I know! Besides, why would she want a monkey?! Even she is not that perverted.

Quorky: She's mated to Vegeta!

What are you implying?

Quorky: He's practically as much monkey as I am!

I RESENT THAT! *Twhacks Quorky over the head*

Quorky: Ouch!

Ha, not so cocky now, are you?

Quorky: *grumble*
 Reviewed By: Kattrina Vixen  On: October 09, 2002 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh wow, thank you j'dee, great prologue, I can't wait to get back to writing abou tour mad mad adventures, or is that just my mad mad adventures????

See you in the fic..
~Kitty Cat~
 Reviewed By: DeathStorm [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 08, 2002 17:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes! Its baaaaaaaaack! Mwhahaha, let the insanity begin!...Oh wait, it already kind of begun...MORE!
 Reviewed By: BananaGirl  On: October 08, 2002 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dude, that was a good prologue! Thank yaz for letting Quorky stay with me! Damn, this review is gay! No fun or anything, sorry, but I gots to get offline now. I'll submit my piece soon!
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