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Reviewed By: Alex Yoshizaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 01:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh! Please please continue this story! I LOVE your characterization of both Quatre and Duo, I love the naughty bits, and I love that they're being intelligent about relationships.
Write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Alex Yoshizaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 19:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
In regards to Relena as a pink dom, with Dorothy as her sub:
YEE HEE HEE! OH my GOD that's hillarious!!!
::cackles some more::
That is all. |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where's Ch.6!!!!???? *Cries* I want to know what happens. I only got to Ch.2 on FF.net before it took off NC/17, and here I was thinking I'd get the rest... It's soooooo goooood Write more sooooon pleeeeeaaase!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 00:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I think I can forgive you for that utterly ridiculous delay on the merits of this chapter. This was brilliant. Well done. I admit, the wait sucked, but this chapter added a very welcome depth to this story.
Cheers,
--Shella-chan |
Reviewed By: theLeopardGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 14:20 CST
Comment/Review:
That was actually kinda touching. It could have been tricky but you handled it well. Nicely written ^_^ |
Reviewed By: KittyMeowMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Straight 10's! You deserved them too. The writing is brilliant. The emotions are great! I'm glad I stumbled across this one! I can't wait for the next chapter. Though I'm a little sad for Heero, but he should have taken his chance earlier. *grins* Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Onyx Shinigami On: January 14, 2003 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This be fantastic! I am hooked and need to know more!!!! PLEASE Xellas, get it together! Get your Muse out of hibernation (I know mine is enjoying her's). On the non-begging side, this story is as addictive now as when I first read it. Keep up your most excellent work. |
Reviewed By: Fujimiya Jai On: November 30, 2002 20:14 CST
Comment/Review:
*snicker* regularly scheduled nightmares *smirk* Me likes. Please continue. The part about the boys being picked cuz they're gay is unique-me likes. |
Reviewed By: Gideon's Dreamer On: November 18, 2002 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh boy, When I saw that this story was deleted from FF.Net, I almost panicked. Anyways, this story kicks ass! More, please. |
Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thought you should know, this is one of the most delicious fanfictions I've ever read.
Side note on Heero's emotions:
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Aw, diddums. I gotta admit to a bit of sympathy since I'm an avid 1/2 fan myself, but it's his loss & we all know what's in store for him. *smirks*
Cheers,
--Shella-chan |
Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 21:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I believe the appropriate word is something resembling;
"Phreeeeeeeeeeeeeoww!" |
Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's official. This fic rocks. Getting very interesting very quickly methinks ...
Cheers,
--Shella-chan |
Reviewed By: Dreamweaver On: October 11, 2002 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Xellas: Nice to finally catch up with you here afte you left FFN to find a new place to "live". Anyways, I like this story. Usually, most of the GW fics I've come across go according to the relationship principle of "opposites attract" (opposing personalities). I've noted that only a very small group of GW writers who write to the principle of "birds of a feather go together" (similar natures). IF Duo and Quatre make a pairing of it, would you make one out of Heero and Trowa. Or, maybe all 4 bond to each other? It would make a good sense of balance.
Whatever. Just write more of this fic.... |
Reviewed By: Kyra-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 00:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! Where's chapter five? I was expecting there to be an update by now. Hurry up and get on with it. I want to know what this trip is all about. Is anyone planning on enlightening Trowa that Quatre isn't innocent and Duo isn't a light-hearted fool? I could look forward to that confrontation. |
Reviewed By: gothfangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it; suspenseful and extremely sexy. It's great to see someone exploring a different side of Quatre, I like to see him taking control. Good insight on the inner workings of Duo also. Your writing is impressive. I do hope you'll add to this soon, having left it on a perfect cliffhanger. |
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