| "ChiChi's Love: Goku Fights for What is His" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] | 
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 Reviewed By: Ako  On: November 07, 2002 14:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey weres the other chapter. Dude that is good but I got so into i i got mad because you didnt finish | 
 Reviewed By: jessica  On: November 06, 2002 03:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great story please update soon.I wanna find out what happens. | 
 Reviewed By: Lonesayain [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 21, 2002 15:31 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The story is good so far.  I wonder who Tony is really. | 
 Reviewed By: Lisa  On: October 18, 2002 17:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!  This story is getting better and better!  Pleasse keep wrting I want to read what happens next. | 
 Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover  On: October 18, 2002 05:46 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: what's goku going to do? tell me damnit! | 
 Reviewed By: Anonymous  On: October 16, 2002 19:29 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very good fic.  I'm kind of disapointed that ChiChi dind't stop him at the end.  Hope everything turns out for the best.  Keep writing! | 
 Reviewed By: Senshi Bear  On: October 16, 2002 19:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You have to write more!  This fic is awesome.  I 'm kind of sad at chapter three because they are my fav. couple.  Keep writing. | 
 Reviewed By: SS4Gotenks  On: October 16, 2002 19:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OOOOOOOOOHHHHH  this fic is sooooo good.  You keep me in a cliff hanger!!  PLZ keep on writing I want to know more!! | 
 Reviewed By: NightMare_SS_Dante [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 15, 2002 06:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey this fanfic is great..... 
AS SOON AS U READ THIS U BETTER FINSH THE NEXT CHAPTER PLZ. | 
 Reviewed By: Bre  On: October 14, 2002 22:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It was an interesting story so far.  I never would have guessed this turn of events.  but it makes sense seeing how the original plot goes.   
 
well done! | 
 Reviewed By: Lisa  On: October 14, 2002 18:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm sad that he left.  But I'm sure they'll get back otgether.  I like the fight scene.  It was good.  Want to read more please! | 
 Reviewed By: Samurai Girl  On: October 14, 2002 18:56 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Aahh they're gonna break up?  I hope not they are such a cute couple!  Can't wait for the rest | 
 Reviewed By: Lone Lady  On: October 14, 2002 18:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This fic is soooooo cool.  PLease keep on writing. | 
 Reviewed By: Britt Bear [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 13, 2002 12:31 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OOOOOOOOOOO! I seriously CANNOT WAIT for the next chapter! PLEASE LET IT OUT SOOOOON!!! | 
 Reviewed By: SS4Gotenks  On: October 19, 2002 23:20 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Pooor ChiChi!  Ooohhh Goku's mad I bet! I can't wait for the next chapter. | 
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