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"Outlaw Star; The Ryunoken Sword(revised, rededited, and better than ever)" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ]
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 Reviewed By: Coarsedareei  On: July 22, 2005 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I remember seeing this story so long ago...man I don't even remember, but only now did I actually have time to read the entire thing! It's AMAZING! And you did not waste your time at all! Your writing skills are highly exceptional and the fight scenes are so eloquently written! I don't think I have read better fight scenes in any other fiction I've read until this one came along, I swear! It sucks you right in then spits you out just like that, keeping you at the edge of your seat all the while... You should really publish some of your work, then it will really be worth your time, writing and getting paid at the same time! Anyways, HAPPY WRITING and see you soon!
 Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: The Princess of Darkness  On: October 10, 2004 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG!! That was sooo awesome!!!!!!!!!! I cna't ait for the eupolge! This is an amzing story!! I loved very minute of it! Congrats on finshing it!! Was is gonna happen next? is the evil dude honna come back?! LEt me know when u post it up! The Princess of Darkness A.K.A Kairi Dark ImGothicGirl18@aol.com
 Reviewed By: Shadow's Light  On: July 29, 2004 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is an incredible fic. i also like that it is one of the few novel-length Outlaw Star fanfics. The style of writing is good and its very original. In the end it would be a nice twist if the crew got a lot of money and then lost it as the story ended. Just an idea. Also update or suffer a horrible and painful death.
 Reviewed By: DarkBlackLuv373 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*note 2 u: how come u got such a GREAT mind of imagination than me!?!? **im so jealous....** hehe ^_^* but u do bettr than me with ur imagination so keep it up!!! *'n send me a memo again when u've updated!* luv ya 'n ur fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Title: some notes & congrats on story
Reviewed By: DarkBlackLuv373 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2004 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ur story is still one of my favorites!!!! 4get bout those stupid fanfic ppl........ they got no taste!! *if wat u say is true that they let ppl who post up gay lemon fics n get to get away with that.... then the ppl who own fanfiction.net MUST BE GAY THEMSELVES!!!!!!!!! *omg....* (o.O) ---> (O.O) ---> (>.
 Reviewed By: GENTW  On: April 09, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love this story
 Reviewed By: Jilli-chan  On: April 09, 2004 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really liked it please continue it soon ^^
 Reviewed By: ppm,klnhddz  On: January 19, 2004 05:48 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hurry up with the next chapter. I dont want to have to wait 4 months til you decide to post or write again, like you did earlier.
 Title: reviews
Reviewed By: Eastsidegeorgiaboy [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2004 05:25 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Only 18 reviews? People you should be ashamed of yourselfs. It doesnt even take 3 minutes to make a simple review. This is a good story, and it deserves more reviews. Keep writing.
 Reviewed By: fireice [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 28, 2003 00:36 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am yet another person that just wants to say wow! Your story is awsome and has real imagination and the fight scenes are so real i feel like i am actually in the story. I think that if you arent already a professional writer that you should write a book cuz this is totally awsome! I just wish that i could write like you.
 Reviewed By: Reiyu Onin  On: June 27, 2003 23:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Funny thing is that I skipped over 15 at first.
Luckily it wasn't hard to move to 16 from 14.
But anyway, I decided I may as well read it.

I discovered that when it comes to Mel, I react like Mazren, almost seeing her as a little sister. So obviously this lemon thing threw me for a loop.

But anyway, it was actually pretty tasteful, as compared to some other crap I've stumbled across.
It's nice that Gene and Mel's characters didn't take a back seat to the 'act', and Mel's lack of understanding at some points was absolutely hilarious. And Gene was a gentleman the whole time, too.
Congratulations, you have succesfully kept me from running away screaming.

Now hurry up with Chapter 17!!!!!
 Reviewed By: blcrane52 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2003 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love the way you write. The story is put together greatly and keeps you on the edge of your seat. This is one of the best Outlaw Star fanfics I've ever read. Cant wait for the next chapter!
 Reviewed By: vsd2oc  On: June 24, 2003 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hurah...
 Reviewed By: Reiyu Onin  On: June 21, 2003 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's like looking into the face of God himself, and he says to you, 'You are my greatest creation.'

Seriously, this is novel quality.
Absolutly amazing.
 Reviewed By: Teko Windstar [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 14, 2003 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WELL I didn't much time to read so I just Read 15. It turns out that I am proffessional ranked reviewer for LEMONS ,so to speak (name given to me). It was very good indeed and I love GENE and MElFINA getting their turn in the world. The Feelings with them together and MElfina not knowing what to do or say is a very nice touch. ANd to say OUTLAW STAR is my favorite ANIME, This was the best LEMON Yet. NICE!!!!!!
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