| "The Dragon Blade" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: jster1983 On: December 07, 2002 16:43 CST
Comment/Review:
The Evil Bakura killed Seth no doubt about that. Poor Yami is just the unexpected boob who fell for evil Bakura's trap. |
Reviewed By: Ki-chan On: November 17, 2002 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(hikari ki-chan): You are so frickin' evil!!! How could you leave that kinda cliffhanger??!?! *sob*
(yami ki-chan): *blinks* you almost cussed 'kari--good for you!
(hikari ki-chan): shut up or I'm playing the Card Captor soundtrack...
(yami ki-chan): nooooooooooooo!!!!! |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellant! Kaiba as the Dark Magician is a great idea. Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Flameraven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kiba in DM? holy mother of God... There is just something wrong about that, I mean he HATES that card.
This is going to be grate, Seto is going to have to fight his own dragons as the DM, he is going to be pissed... |
Reviewed By: Psycho Sam On: November 12, 2002 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it Elf. Fun to read, but it did get alittle confusing at times. Good job. |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! You have done an excellant job on the characterizations and exciting plot. I love the way you have done Kaiba and the way Yugi and Yami are constantly changing perspectives. Looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: Alecto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll get to work on that list soon. I'll have plenty of time on my college trip. Don't wanna delay the output of your wonderful fics. OMG!!! Kaiba-kun cursed! I know he can be rude but... I like it. ^______^ How sweet of Jou-kun to think so much of Mai. It's seems like something he would do. Poor Ryou-kun... Yami Bakura is such a bastard sometimes. I loved the lines about Kaiba-kun not wanting a Yami. Yugi-kun's last comment was hilarious. Good, you know Jou-kun's afraid of ghosts and stuff. Just an afterthought, have you ever noticed how similar Joey from Friends is to dub Joey? o.O |
Reviewed By: Alecto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PERFECT SCORE!!! Nyahahahahaha... Gomen but this chapter was so sugoi. Things are finally happening. Bakura-kun was totally cool as a Brit, better than what the dub makes him anyway. *kicks dub* Seth... I can't wait for him! Yeah, Bakura-kun has a lot of occult cards, especially his famed DEATH cards. I can probably compile a list for you if you want. Poor Anzu. Ballet can do so brutal... I always imagined her more as a contemporary dancer, but maybe that's just because I saw her perform DDR. Poor Kaiba-kun needs to rescue his lady love. You must write next chapter soon! It's rude to keep people waiting in suspense. ^__________^ Especially since Jou-kun actually lands a shot on Kaiba-kun. o.O |
Reviewed By: none of your buisness:p On: October 27, 2002 10:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey hey
Great chappie
please continue soon!!!!
^__^ |
Reviewed By: Red Phoenix On: October 19, 2002 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is *SUCH* a good fic! (So far!) PLEASE put Yugi and Tea together!
Oh, just so you know; I'm known as B-chan on fanfiction.net.
Why don't *you* write sekkuaru roman (sexual romance) abot Seto and Serenity? You'd do good. On the other point your right; its nice to read other peoples work, too. Yours is great, anyway! |
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