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Reviewed By: True Words On: February 03, 2004 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the control that Kaibs has. It makes him seem really caring towards her andit hightens the storyline. He resists his urges. Please make a sequel. I'd LOVE it a lot. Oh, and #1 Kaiba Fan, Your full of SH***** The real story has them get together and YOU KNOW what happens.
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Reviewed By: Heron of Ocean On: February 03, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story. It was my first time reading a lemon and I liked it. I wont put my name or age because its embarressing, but its 13 over. I see why some people like and read lemons now. Hope you make a sequel or two real soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: /// On: February 02, 2004 00:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make a sequel I think its good
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Reviewed By: Mooselini McSqueegee On: November 21, 2003 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was a really great fic. I normally don't read lemons, but I really liked your story. Kaiba is one of my favorite chracters too. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: reddragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
id give it higher on the last three ratings but the damn computer wouldn't let me this was 1 of the best ones i've read in long time!!
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Reviewed By: Emily10 On: September 19, 2003 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! This is one of the best fanfics ever. They way you portyayed the characters is sheer brilliance! Is it really true that Seto/Serenity are actually a couple? If it's true i hope to God it's so!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ultamite dragon On: July 26, 2003 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! IF I COULD GIVE YOU @ MILLION DOLLARS FOR EACH SECOND I ENJOYED READING THIS YOU WOULD BE RICH! I HOPE YOU COULD MAKE MORE SETO/SERENITY LEMONS. IF YOU DO I WILL GIVE A GREAT REVIEW FOR EACH ONE. And KAIBA IS THE BEST. SERENITY IS SO LUCKY TO HAVE HIM. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ultamite dragon On: July 26, 2003 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! IF I COULD GIVE YOU @ MILLION DOLLARS FOR EACH SECOND I ENJOYED READING THIS YOU WOULD BE RICH! I HOPE YOU COULD MAKE MORE SETO/SERENITY LEMONS. IF YOU DO I WILL GIVE A GREAT REVIEW FOR EACH ONE. |
Reviewed By: Sally_Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very awesome, Elf! ^_^ The more I read, the more I really love the SerenityxSeto pairing. Poor Yugi, far too innocent to be walking into things like that! LOL Excellent work! |
Reviewed By: #1 Seto Fan On: December 13, 2002 17:19 CST
Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE A SICK, SICK MIND AND TAKE THE NAME OF ANIME AND CRUCH IT WITH YOUR FIST!!!
you dicust me. |
Reviewed By: Arioc the Vagrant On: December 02, 2002 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really strong overall.
Writing style and proofreading were both way above average, which is always nice to see.
The pairing is fairly non-cannon, and the presentation of the characters is somehow both true to the series and extremely new in its own right.
I really loved reading this fic, as well. |
Reviewed By: w@// 0f i//u$i0N On: December 01, 2002 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that was a great fan- fiction, i hope that u wirte more soon!:D |
Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally got to this! Almost seems like a sequel to your first fic for this pairing, and gave me some ideas for my own sequel...
Anyway, loved it, as usual. Yugi's reaction was predictable and fun. |
Reviewed By: Ryne Adams On: November 15, 2002 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story. Kaiba is one of my favorite characters in Yu-Gi-Oh. |
Reviewed By: Red Phoenix (AKA B-chan) On: October 27, 2002 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *NEVER* expected you to add something like *THAT* to the story!!! Poor Seren and Kaiba!!! How *EMBARRESSING*!!!! Coulda been worse; *Mokuba* could have been there! Now *THAT* would've been awkward! Then again...given Joey's personality and over-protective nature towards his precious :::coughs::: 'baby' sister, it wasn't that shocking. Sure was funny as Hell, though ^_^!
:::beams with pleasure:::Thank you *SO* much for that compliment! I'm glad you thought my fic was beautiful. I do try my best. I *am* going to revise it; I *know* I can do better and improve on it. I'll let ya know when I finish.
Write more of these! :::smirks:::Hmmm, wonder what Yami, Tea, Tristan and Ryou will say when they here about *THIS*. (Tristan would probably die laughing!) |
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