| "Inu Yasha: HIGHSCHOOL" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Demonchic_K On: June 08, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this so far. I think that Inuyasha should beat Hojo, and then kiss Kagome infront of her class, or at least her friends.
JUST UPDATE THE DAmN FIC!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: May 27, 2003 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OoO! Oo! Inuyahsa beatin' tha crap out o' hojo!! yes.... LOL!! lol. well now u kno wat i want. so give it here. lol j/k. good job w/ tha first chp. update soon. a good author neva leaves tha audience hangin' for long. or else they become uninterested. so dun let tat happen. |
Reviewed By: KinkyKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 08:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hold on i have a though let hojo try to put the moves on Kagome then Inu beat the crap out of him and kiss Kagome there everyone would be happy! |
Reviewed By: KinkyKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 08:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh oh oh b b b!!! |
Reviewed By: Kagome-sama On: February 16, 2003 09:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
B I wana see hojo get the shit beat out of him! |
Reviewed By: myst runner (not bothing to log in) On: January 19, 2003 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Myst: This was really good. i say beat up hojo cause i want to watch him get the freaking crap get kicked out of him just like that fucking freaking harry and marry champ mwahahahahahahah...
Trio: me thinks she's crazy.
Myst: am not. |
Reviewed By: obssesivefangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well first of all your fic was really good!!^_^
also hope you get the next chapter up soon!!
anyways i think Squall'sScar is right b/c it would be WAY out of character for him and it dont like Hojo at all so beating him up would be really cool.
BYE;p
obssesivefangirl sgining off!!
PeAcE BaBy yeah!;}
i have so many PrObLeMs! O.o O.O o.O |
Reviewed By: MashiroInu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 18:15 CST
Comment/Review:
I WANT TO SEE THE CRAP BEATEN OUT O' HOUJO!!!BWAHAHAHAHA!!!
^-^ |
Reviewed By: Mai On: January 03, 2003 23:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I think that you should go with Inuyasha beating up Hojo, or you should do something like that but dont try to make it so Inuyasha looks like a really bad guy and everyone hates him. |
Reviewed By: me On: December 07, 2002 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
b. Inu yasha will kiss Kagoma infront of her whole class or .....mwahahahaha |
Reviewed By: Sora-miss thang On: November 23, 2002 11:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I think beat up hojo!! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan On: November 15, 2002 14:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Good so far! Haven't seen enough to rate, but really good! and this Mara's opinion about what should happen next is B, definitely B! I've always pitied Inuyasha about the whole Hojo thing... ^^ |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, if Inuyasha kisses Kagome in front of the whole class, it would be out of character. So I would go with beating Hojo up, since that keeps him in character. By the way, great fic!!! |
Reviewed By: CreativeJenn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I personally think that you should write based on letter C. It would probably make you have alot more to write about, I and I think that your a good writter, so I would like to see more of your creativness :) |
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