| "Only In Your Eyes Am I Worthy" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Title: Chapter 31
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 12:12 CST
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Ah! Another fine chapter! My, my, but you DO cover some ground in this one. Very nice contrast job between the three primaries, by the way. Seeing the differences in the perception of their realationships between each of them is very helpful in understanding how each of them think. Also, you did a good job of demonstrating the differences between Asuka's and Rei's sexual boundaries. It works especially good in light of the differences in their perceptions of 'love'. Excellent chapter, and I eagerly await the next one. :)
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, most excellent, I must say. The characterization is spot on, even after personality modification, the conversations are often witty, the emotions have a 'real' feel to them, and the story kept me hooked. I 'couldn't put it down', you might say. I find the illustrations, at least for chapter 30(haven't had a chance to peruse the other chapters on your site yet), extremely amusing. I may read this again, sometime, and definitely anticipate the next update.
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Title: Hmmmm
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 20:57 CST
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He he he... I read what you put as the opening page of Asuka's war journal and the last few lines are ... helarious please excuse the spelling... Any way the illustrations you chose for this chapter on your web-page seem appropriate for this chapter's theme... also this reigns as the number one fic on my Favotites of All-time ^.^! Also the comment is the same as last time, or is it now two times ago?
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Title: Chapter 30
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 05:41 CST
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Very nice! This chapter is definately an excellent read. That line 'The future of humanity rests on the shoulders of horny teenagers. God help us all' made me laugh so hard I almost fell out of my seat. So true, and yet, so appropiate! I look forward to your next chapter.
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Title: Chapter 27
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 04:43 CST
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This is definately a good read. I am especially liking the development of Asuka; it is rare to see her mature like that. I loved the 'happy pills' line. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome new chapter, I loved it and can't wait to see more.
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Title: Same
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 18:35 CST
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Same as last time.
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Title: Same
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 21:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Same as last time.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome new chapter, I love the fact that there is forward movement in Shinji and Rei's relationship. Hope to read more soon, the short break made me relize how addicted to your writing I've become.
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Title: You have a talent
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
The comment and rating are the same as my last review.
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Title: It keeps me guessing
Reviewed By: BraveEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fics I have read. I take my hat off to you. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sappy or not I loved it. A great chapter and an excellent first kiss. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 21:10 CST
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Awesome chapter, I liked the interaction between Rei and Asuka. I really hope Shinji can get out his feelings for Rei, maybe a little help from Asuka. Anyway great work, hope to read more soon.
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Title: *Applause*
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 19:07 CST
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Oh wow...one of the better Christmas presents I've gotten for awhile - YOU UPDATED! *Applause* Awesome. Despite your 2 year disappearance, it's good to see that you've lost none of your skill as a writer. Kudos to you buddy, keep it up!
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Title: Exceptional
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the few fics I have allowed myself to add to my favorits list... yours is the 3rd to be added and kept most others I have added were temporary because I liked the story and did not wish to lose the story... Good job. Keep up the good work because you meet my standerds and excede them by a small but impressive margin. I eagerly await your next update.
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