| "Millennium Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 07:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Goodgoodgoood GOOD! Keep it up! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: April 01, 2003 23:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow this fic hasn't been updated in a while. I'm glad you're still putting it out... I can't believe you left Yuugi and Ryou like that! You're making Malik and Marik brothers? Oookay... why not. This fic is still really cool! Please update sooner than later! Arigato! Ja ne! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 18:38 CST
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Well I like the setup of this fic, however I am worried. Mainly about the whole 'secret relationship' between Yami and Yugi. Why? Cause it's a pointless plot device used to force angst into the story.
There is no 'real' reason to hide the relationship. Yeah the other band members would be suprised but they'll get over it. And I could understand them not wanting to have their personal life picked apart by the media.
But the whole secret relationship thing is terribly cliche and boring. There really is no good reason for hiding what they have, and a good story might go down the tubes because of a crummy plot device.
You can do better than that. Have Yugi and Yami deal with real relationship conflicts. Like having trouble finding time to be together, or competition between groups. Not some 'we have to hide our love for no real reason.'
Icz |
Reviewed By: Sunshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 07:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! ^__^ I'm really glad I found this fic; I'm a fan of Lizeth's art myself. And your plot's going well so far. Just one little thing I'd like to point out: typically, Malik refers to the real Malik Ishtar, while Marik is his Yami. (Just kind of confusing to have that switched.) Anyway, keep up the great writing! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 05:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
5 word all the same: MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!
Yugi: I thought u already read this fic on fanfiction net
So wats ur point
Yugi: -_- |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
5 words: I LOVE this fic! Wonderful work, and I can not wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 17, 2003 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
That chapter was really good. I'm glad you were able to update again. The talk Yami had with Joey was interesting. I wonder how their going to handle the relationship now. Please post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: November 30, 2002 02:00 CST
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Ooh this is a good fic. Please have more of it out soon. ^_^ Thank you.
(Y+Y4EVER) |
Reviewed By: super_sheep On: January 08, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! This fic is great!!!! I hope you write more soon!! Yes!! Do more Bakura with Ryou scenes!! Can you do Ryou/Bakura pairing? I mean is what you were asking in the 5th chap, if you wanted to know if you should change the pairing or not? I wish you would. Pretty please with sugr lumps on top?? *makes big watery eyes*
Ryou/Bakura is my favorite yaoi couple!!!! *huggles them to death* ^-^
Update soon!!!!
Now that's done with, Super_Sheep has to save the day from............ um....... evil grass!! |
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