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Reviewed By: Seto Kaiba 15 On: December 16, 2002 17:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it because it's sad, thrilling and it has a lot of nice curves. Yes I'll answer you'r question from chapter 15, I do feel sad for Yami.
I think that Seto and Yami should make up and make out. `_~ I feel bad for Seto. Yami should make up and start to LOVE YUGI, if you know what I mean. Well gotta go see ya ~_~ |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 06:45 PST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* /imitating ancient person/ Only I, in my infinite wisdom, could feel pity for Yami.
*Hikari, Aibou & YamiPP* /snickering quietly/
*pingpong* /stares at them blankly/
*Hikari, Aibou & YamiPP* /snickering louder/
*pingpong* I think that this needs a little more in depth actiona and it would be fine.
*Hikari, Aibou & YamiPP* /Laughing loudly/ Yami needed that!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 15, 2002 09:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Yugis_girl On: December 15, 2002 02:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more!!!! Your story is really good! I wish I could write as good as you. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nakuru Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 22:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I can't wait to hear more. I told you I'd be back... **slightly evil-ish laugh** |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 19:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah!!!!! i want more!!!!!! ^_~ it's late and i have ta go ta bed now!!!! |
Reviewed By: Yumei On: December 11, 2002 21:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! It's great so far! I hope you keep writing and your Detention fic is rather interesting as well. ^_~ Bah, you're talented...! Update again soon!!
~Yumei |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2002 07:56 PST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* Pahoraoh's Gift was better. Continue!
*YamiPP* no comment.
*pingpong* Sheenagami needs 2 take her pills... |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 19:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah!!!!!!!!!! ^_________________^ that was great!!!!! i want more!!!!!!!!!! stupid yami!! die!!!!! die i tell ya *throughs random stuff at yami as he runs away* muhahahahaha! |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 09, 2002 14:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keora Muse: Evil Yami and evil big brother leave poor Ryou alone.
Alison Muse: Yeah dad leave Ryou alone.
Maku Muse ( Alison and Maku are new): Yeah leave uncle Ryou alone.
Love this can't wait for more tho my main muses are grumpy. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 19:01 PST
Comment/Review:
like the fic, and the happy ending. i dont really like the yugi/joey, seto/yami, but o well. love ur fics! |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 05, 2002 14:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter and you can use Keora
if you want or something. Her Yami was always watching from the shadows
and seemed to be almost catlike. |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 22:16 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the fic and all, but there seems to be a chapter missing... I can't remember which one{and it may just be MY screwy computer!!} but, well, figured I'd tell ya!!
I'll be watchin' for more!
Ja!
Katmon =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 11, 2002 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it and I can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 03, 2002 18:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats Ok I understand what you mean. Well if you ever want to use Keora
just tell me. Love it so far can't wait for more. |
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