| "Lay All Your Love On Me" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: XD On: November 23, 2003 13:47 EST
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Whoa... well, you're making Kaoru's new character a bit more suspicious, just as what Aoshi had stated... Very suspicous... Is she just fooling around? Or affected by what those two nurses who were talking about Kaoru, when she was hald and half conscience? Hmm... I'm glad your exams are over. Geez. After my winter holiday, I'm having mine.
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Reviewed By: zeb14 On: November 15, 2003 11:22 EST
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I really want you to finish this fic! I love it. It's such a good plot and is written very well. It may be too late, you may have given up on it or something (i understand, i love to write too). But if by any chance you get this review please update. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: XD On: October 14, 2003 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked youre plot. It's so sad. What would of caused Kaoru's amenisa? Was it because, she last heard those two nurses talking about her and Kenshin, and she hocse to forget him? Or did she really have amenesia because of the blood colt in her brain vessel? I hope you get inspired soon, to continue writing this fic.
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Title: ch.10
Reviewed By: chmsweety [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::waves hand over here:: you gotta finish this story!!!!!!! ::shake's fist in front of eyes:: it's getting good in every chapter. i know that kaoru remembers kenshin!! stop this pretending it's hurting kenshin!!! i could feel his heart cracking at every lie that kaoru is doing to him!!! |
Reviewed By: ari On: July 01, 2003 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is real good i would actually brush up on megumi's jealousy and choice of men. it was fine before but now it's getting u noe, obvious and unrealistic. i'm a huge critic on fanfics but i give it a thumbs up! |
Reviewed By: anonmyus On: June 25, 2003 00:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i need more i am itching to see what happens next omg *paces back and forth |
Reviewed By: serena On: June 17, 2003 06:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snif...snif...snif* oh mi god poor kenshin...why is it always so hard on him? i hate megumi she is such a bitch! poor kennny! please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Musoka14 On: June 15, 2003 22:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...i started reading this and i was liking the way it was going....now it took this unexpected twist and it's even BETTER!!! that whole amneisia(sp?) thing was awfully cool....i can't wait to read more!^_^ |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 15:40 EDT
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Yay! You finally updated!!! Hurry and update again as fast as u can, plz!^_^ |
Reviewed By: FushigiHikari12 On: June 02, 2003 11:40 EDT
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;_; *sniff* Poor Kenshin!! Y'know the speech that Sabrina said...that was so amazing. Makes me think maybe you've experienced the same thing, eh? *nudge nudge* And Kaoru...she sure learns fast! I mean, asking about the certificate and all that...but they just HAVE to get back together! Keep up this amazing work!
Ja ne! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: peach_blossom On: April 16, 2003 21:03 EDT
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i love reading "lay all your love on me" pleasessssss.... update the story. i can't wait to read the ress. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 16:46 EDT
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Why'd you have to go and give Kaoru amnesia? Stop making things so hard on poor Ken-san! |
Reviewed By: FushigiHikari12 On: April 13, 2003 11:52 EDT
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oh my god this is just amazing!!! (i've read all the chapters up to this one but i didn't review since it was a bit late for that...^.^; gomen..) will Kaoru ever remember Kenshin? i hope so! and who do those nurses think they are, talking about her like that?? *fumes* oh yea, you know i used to hate megumi too but now she seems a lot nicer ^.^ which is definitely a good thing. anyway just wanted to let you know how FANTASTICALLY AMAZING your fanfic is!!! please continue for your fans' sakes!! (also i don't know if you mentioned this since i am so forgetful, but since the Kenji has Kenshin's hair, does he have Kaoru eyes??) ok then Ja! |
Reviewed By: Shizuka On: April 10, 2003 00:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehhe...i was strolling around the net and here i was...i just thought of saying hi i guess and as always i love your fics and wonderful works!!!! very inspiring and enjoyable...well continue ne and till then ill wait in ffnet or here..so tc and ja for nowie!!!!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is a really goood story! I hop Kaoru wakes up soon! Why couldn't you have put some lemon in here? |
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