| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Leonie On: December 14, 2003 06:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love your fic. I hope you update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Legana On: December 10, 2003 08:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...for the girl "Ithilwen-as-guest" DINT YOU *READ* the story??? it's not confusing at ALL! theres a big difference between Ilandra and Zucchini. GEE next time you read a fic READ it! and THINK before you review ¬¬ anyway...... Vegeta Goddess, the fic still rules =) I wish you goooooodluck with all the things you have to cope with now and I am sure we all understand that you cannot update as often as one would like, the fic is worth waiting for. I love every part in this story, and I dont see why ppl bitch over it, escpecialy the Sex part, I love it. Maybe not a bit too detailed but hell, we all have imaginations :P ( sick in my case :p) goodluck with everything again!!!!1 Waiting for the next chapter and for you to feel better, enjoy your holiday! Legana.
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 15:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please feel better!!!!!! I understand the rigors of going to a university; finals are tough and you get a lot of work. You are a wonderful author, and I know that you will continue to write beautiful stories. Don't be stressed though. Take your time and remember that you've got a ton of people rooting for you!
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Reviewed By: bimbo an ditz On: December 08, 2003 07:16 EST
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heyaz well could u please add us 2 ur update list thingy it would b g8 2 know when u update ur fic our address is bimbo_ditz@yahoo.co.uk thanks! we hope B/V get bk 2getha soon that ilianda person is such a.... grr..... she deserves beats like no otha!!!!!!!!!!! update soon plz thanks!!!!! bye byez!p.s u r nearly all the way to number 1 looked at fic on mediaminer just another 100 or so reviews and ur there! go for it!!!!! bye byez p.s it all printed out so far now except the latest chap lol. well done! :0) and update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Slave
Reviewed By: kriss On: December 07, 2003 22:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad your feeling better! The masocist in me loves the aniticipation. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: princess cat girl On: December 07, 2003 19:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey sorry to hear about the work and the stres when i get that way i go on line and find someone to talk to its grat help and since your problebly never going to speek to them again you doint have to be embaressed so any way thanks for the up date hope to hear from you soon later.
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Reviewed By: ShadowObscurity On: December 03, 2003 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this fic alot. I cant wait for a update, and i hope life doesnt get in the way. Your writing style is great and I have never read one like this. That is something i rarly see. PLease excuse any spelling or grammar mistakes in my review. ~adios
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Reviewed By: bimbo an ditz On: December 03, 2003 11:45 EST
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we jst read the whole thing it rocks big!!!! gta lota lemon in bt hey oh well! the arguin wiv b/v an tht cow z is gud it v fune! well best b gtin goin we gt xams nxt week so u not the only 1 bt they r gcse mocks coz we live in england hope u upd8 soon bye byez!
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Reviewed By: bimbo an ditz On: December 02, 2003 11:14 EST
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hiya it us again this fic is g8888888 plz update soon p.s just 4 a reminder on r behalf we printed off chap 14 cheers will du more asap and gud work!!!!! hope it all works out good 4 b an v!
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Reviewed By: wowzers! On: December 01, 2003 06:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go gadget go! This is fantastic!
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Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 23:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really great. I read it while ago, and I just realized that I didn't review. At least I don't think I did. Heehee. Anyways, please update soon, it's a really good fic.
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Reviewed By: Legana On: November 23, 2003 17:48 EST
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Heya =) I love the story I am sure we all understand you too have your own things to do..plus it's worth waiting for =) Hope you feel better now :**** You're a very good writer =) and to come back on the chapter with Vegeta and Bulma in the basement (with the whip and all) it wasnt so sick at all, atleast I dont think so.. I like those kind of things and yeah I guess I am sick as well :P keep up the great work but dont forget your life ;) dont appology to us, you dont have to do it for me anyway hahaha okay enough babble shit =) looking forward until the next chapter! I really like it as well how you make it so unprodictable =) it challenges me to read on and not get bored of it. this is it for now, I dont want you snoring on your keybord while trying to read this crap I am writing :p (No offence for you snoring of course hahaha) again, good work =) =) goodluck with your exams and uni!!!!
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Title: *spank*
Reviewed By: Legana On: November 23, 2003 17:37 EST
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I couldnt leave the invitation to spank you ;) the story rules, I will review longer in it at the next chap. kisses
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Reviewed By: blah Bob blah On: November 22, 2003 08:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
V good. I'm impressed with your writng sturtcure...it shows such an improvement now from when you first started writing this fic! Although maybe thats just because you're writing by yourself now. no offense but Lady D is a shockign writing at times...she's even worse then you at grammar! (J/K!!! I love you babe!)
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Reviewed By: Sweetpee On: November 21, 2003 19:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly one of the best fics ive ever read! and i hope you update soon! this is really good!
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