| "Rain: MSTed" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: blinkie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 18:58 CST
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whoooo...that was the WORST fic ever!! if only i could've seen the original! it think it's not on ff.net anymore though. ive been searching but it's gone! damn, i hate Mary Sues! You're right there: why do they always have to be perfect? can you say "delusions of grandeur"? grrrr....but it was so funny! sanzo so OOC. and gojyo..drinking tea with yaone? i think *hehe* something lower than the stomach is really gojyo's target...lol. and that part that said 'YOU GENJYOSANZO" and "YOU MARYSUE" is fckin funny!
lmao! is there a next chapter or is that horrile (i mean the original) done already? |
Reviewed By: blinkie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 18:43 CST
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hahahahhaha!!! this was too funny! i never thought therew ould be a fic as bad as this in existence! love your comments! one of my favorites: 'What's a SWALLS?' and the part where one of them says Walls ar supposed to be solid. and lots more!! im off to read the next!
enjoyment factor: 10/10 |
Reviewed By: naceae On: January 08, 2003 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't think I've laughed so much and so hard in such a long time. It's been years since I've read an MST and reading this has just made me want to read more. Everybody needs a good laugh every now and then. This takes the cake. |
Reviewed By: kei on v_m On: January 07, 2003 02:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The 1st reviewer has it right: how possible is it for a human being to write that badly....
unless it was deliberate? That fic is sooo bad, I begun to suspect it was *purposefully* written that way. Why? God knows. Maybe people enjoys being tortured. Imagine what those 3 MSTers went thru, my side still aches! 'nyway the ratings are for the MST, *not* the MSTed. |
Reviewed By: gallatica On: January 02, 2003 22:55 CST
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oh gawd!!!!!!! yeah, i saw the first chappie in ff.net....i thought it was an insult to saiyuki!esp to sanzo!
i think i laughed to much..i have trouble breathing now.....*wheezewheeze* |
Reviewed By: Aspara On: January 02, 2003 04:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Do you know how much I love you? Do you? I've been moaning over that fic. Moaning. I mean really . . . |
Reviewed By: quatre On: December 29, 2002 18:21 CST
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I can certainly enjoy a good MSTing, but this, sadly, was not one.
I think it's incredibly obvious the author of the original fic is not a native English speaker. He/she obviously does need to work on the language skills and needs a beta reader, but I thought the MSTing was incredibly rude in the way that it kept calling the author an idiot, dimwit, etc. Not being completely fluent in a 2nd (or 3rd or 4th...) language does not make him or her an idiot. Being called names certainly will not help him or her improve, but then again I guess the point of this MST was just to ridicule. |
Reviewed By: PD On: December 27, 2002 21:35 CST
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I have to say, you are absolutely correct. It IS the worst thing I've ever seen. I seem to recall reading the synopsis at FF.net and deciding to pass. But - shame on me! - I nearly fell out of my chair reading your MST.
My first guess is that the author (Elisabeth? I wasn't paying attention, sorry.) is not a native English speaker. My first suggestion to her would have to be: find an English-speaking beta and work them to death! And no more posting until you do!
You, on the other hand, did a great job. Please, we need you to do more. |
Reviewed By: Akari On: December 26, 2002 23:50 CST
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*dies*
OMG that was too funny!
How is it possible for someone to write that badly!?
It boggles the mind. |
Reviewed By: Isami On: December 28, 2002 09:57 CST
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I was certainly amused. I had a very bad day and this fic MSTed chears me up! At least there are people out there who writes worse than me. I am very happy there is such..human that would this kind of fic. I know, it's horrible and I'm happy that it is completely and utterly bad.
How old is she anyway? Younger than me, by any chance? |
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