"...With the French Maid in Kaiba’s Room!" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Title: HURRY! Reviewed By: Pokemongirl On: April 12, 2004 00:11 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I NEED MORE!
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Title: MORE! Reviewed By: seto_kaiba_lover On: November 28, 2003 19:28 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love it plz make more i just love this fic i come back here to see if you updated it yet
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Reviewed By: fangirlofinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 06:47 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: loved it !continue!
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Title: elf Reviewed By: Takeshi Silvertongue On: September 21, 2003 11:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i like it. please update it. |
Reviewed By: Shadow Kitten 9831 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 21:18 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I read this on FanFiction.net and I it! |
Reviewed By: RavenKaiba On: March 08, 2003 00:52 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like the basis storyline. Personally I think that lemons are slightly pointless, but in this case it would tie in the storyline, but for the love of god, no nasty stuff!! |
Reviewed By: duos_bunny On: February 21, 2003 15:50 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: u haveta puy more!!!like with a tiny bit of lemon and lime! *giggles* it would be great 4 it cause of the title and all!
*sighs and waves* well good luck and put more on soon!
p.s. IMEAN IT PUT MORE ON SOON! |
Reviewed By: xtreemmasheen3k2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 01:07 CST Comment/Review: Kaiba and Shizuka (e. Serenity). I've heard of this from fanfics, but have never been a fan of them. In the show, it's either Honda (e. Tristan) or Otogi (e. Duke Devlin) that are the most likely suitors, Honda getting my vote. I don't think Jounouchi (e. Joey) really meant that Shizuka could beat Kaiba, i think he was just exagerating. Is your brother kidding? Shizuka has been nothing but a hot innocent girl the entire series. Yes, she dueled when the Big 5 took over the Battle Ship in season 4 with the whole Deck Master System (goes like this: Games of Darkness (better known as series 1), Duelist Kingdom, Battle City, Battle Ship, and Alcatraz Duel Tower), but she TOTALLY sucked at it, and Big 4 (i think) was about to directly attack her when Honda got in the way for her and took the hit, and wound up having his mind traped in a teddy bear (seriously). Thankfully, Otogi was able to help their team win with his Dice Dungeon and Dimension Dice cards that turned the field into a Dungeon Dice Monsters field. Anyways i have a feeling that sex is going to be involved in the story one way or another. Anyways, then of course, Kaiba routinely changes his clothes. It's just that one day takes a while to show in many episodes. I like his slick new white Battle City look. |
Reviewed By: ruby queen of evil [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 04:27 CST Comment/Review: i heard that she gets a big fat thing for sety as matter of fact... |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: February 09, 2003 11:45 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this fanfic! more Plz! |
Reviewed By: xtreemmasheen3k2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 18:41 CST Comment/Review: ugh, no, she never gets a "thing" for Kaiba, she never has, and she probably never will, because she has Tristan and Otogi (e. Duke Devlin) competing for her heart and Tristan has really shown he cares about her. Most likely, Seto likes Isis (e. Ishizu) because right before Yami Malik's match with Yami Yugi, he's about to sink the island they are dueling on in order to stop Yami Malik, but when he hears that she won't leave without her brother, he rushes to Yugi and hands him the card that he says will stop Ra's One Turn Kill technique. |
Reviewed By: omegamaster [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 21:14 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: put some sex in it. (i think this because it could tie in with the plot. the tittle speaks for itself) it could make things a little more interesting and could please a lot of people. REMEBER THAT! |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun On: January 24, 2003 18:58 CST Comment/Review: This story totally sparked my interest. It has a great story line. Keep it going! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Bandit Keith On: January 20, 2003 15:34 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I relly enjoyed your story alot I think you should write more short storys such as this.
From Bandit Keith |
Reviewed By: yugi lovr On: January 11, 2003 13:50 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ::starts chant:: LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! LEMON! MAKE IT A LEMON!!!! |
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