| "Akirame Norwen" Reviews/Comments [ 159 ] |
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Reviewed By: mei tenshi On: December 12, 2003 02:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this is sooo good ....just keep keep wrting writng when you want to write ....lol srry well keep up the good writin there neko :)
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Title: Update in sight?
Reviewed By: RinRinYotsubaPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there an update anytime soon??? Please say there is!! It's very sad to leave a cliffy with poor Riku being beat up....Please stop the insane beating of Riku!!! He doesn't deserve it *reads last chapter* OK, yes he does deserve that but for however long he's been beaten now I think is enough.Please? Or I'll think up something terrible to do to you....*You know I can't think anything up, Neko. I suck at punishments....* Um, I got a new story up but I don't know if you wanna read it. It's a vampire fic called Vampires Surround Me. So far I have 5 chapters up. Anyway, think up some more stuff for the story or....well I dunno the or part but it'll be terrible. Bunny-chan
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Reviewed By: Kitty Strife On: October 29, 2003 06:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to update?! it's been almost two months since your last chapter and I wannaknow what happens next!!!!
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Reviewed By: StarBlaze On: October 18, 2003 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good story, but u need 2 update it more often.
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Reviewed By: extremeaction64 On: October 07, 2003 05:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story! My sister and I were wondering if you could put a scene in where Riku has to dress up like a girl, like Cloud did in Final Fantasy 7. Just a suggestion!!
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Reviewed By: Vortex Crush On: September 28, 2003 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. But you need to update it. It is just cruel to stop with Riku getting the tar beat out of him by Akirame
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Reviewed By: KittyStrife17 On: September 27, 2003 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
perfect ten for this fic!!! I really like this story and I was wondering, how often are you going to update it? You can e-mail me at mbmckethan@nc.rr.com
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Reviewed By: Soulwielder [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Neko you've done it again, this is a fanfic worthy of any reader, there are not many stories this good out there and don't let anyone tell you differant. I kinda feel sorry for Riku, he tries hard but he can't compleatly break the ice before it rehardens. (you know what I mean) anyway this is a wonderful story, I look foward to more chapters in the future. Caio! |
Title: #1 Fan
Reviewed By: RinRinYotsubaPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'll be happy to beat ya with a stick. I think the #1 Fan should do the honors. Just kidding. Just write more soon. There's gotta be something good floating around that could be used as part of the story. It doesn't matter if it sounds wacky. The story's already pretty wacky.Anyway, before you wanna beat poor Bunny-chan here with a stick, write more!! |
Title: Heat
Reviewed By: rotflmao On: September 11, 2003 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV EVERYTHING! UPDATE SOON! MWUHAHAHA...Riku.... a frog?! TOO GOOD! Hurry up and, no, don't skip to the ending, write it properly!! ^^; |
Reviewed By: MyOwnShukuun On: September 06, 2003 06:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol. Kissing frogs? That's original.
Jack: I loev this story!! *huggles story*
Orion: And you are right... LEGOLAS IS -NOT- A FAIRY!
Kiara: Please continue soon. |
Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: RinRinYotsubaPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2003 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I dunno what to say....I had something planned but I forget now. Write more soon or....a vampire will hunt you down?? I dunno....Don't ask me, I have an obsession with vampires right now. I asked my dad if I could be a vampire and he said only in my own time. My friend asked her mom if she could be a vampire and her mom asked what kinda drugs she's on. I was listening on the phone as she asked. It was really funny. Anyway, this is supposed to be about the story, right? Ummm....right more soon and get to the good stuff! I'm not saying it's not good right now but you have to have something really good planned next, don'tcha? So let's see what ya got! Bye now,
The artist formerly known as Bunny-chan(Just kidding! It just popped in my head.) |
Reviewed By: RinrinYotsuba On: August 20, 2003 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi-Hi!! I read everything and what's gonna happen?? You can at least tell me right?? You don't have to let anybody else know that you told me...It'll be our little secret. Bye-bye!
Bunny-chan
P.S.Write more way soon!! |
Reviewed By: trapt_tears On: July 20, 2003 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not only is KH na awsome game, but the FF series are awsome too, and you've added characters from most of those games as well! You dont have much OOC, and all the characters relay emotion as if you were watching them when you wrote it! A perfect 10 for this story!! i love it!! this story has to be the best fic ive ever read, and it keeps getting better! keep writing! i reveiwed only 10 days ago (as coldplay child) but it feels like forever!!! you added another chapter, but you still need to keep updating!... please? |
Reviewed By: RinrinYotsuba On: July 14, 2003 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi-hi!!! I finished reading the chapters you have posted. I'm sorry I didn't read it when you first posted it. I thought I had something set up to tell me when you updated your story. Some #1 fan, huh? Wai!!! I'm soo stupid! Not really but I guess I am sometimes. Keep updating!!!
Bunny-chan |
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