| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 12:14 CST
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Visions? These actually sound like garden-variety pregnancy nightmares. This isn\'t as bright as your earlier chapters, but the ending is very strong. It\'s good to see the resurrection.
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Reviewed By: robyrules4eva On: July 25, 2005 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi. I love this story one of my faverotes for inuyasha fanfics. i was wonderingf when you would update next. it's a really good fic and i really love it and i was hoping i could find out what happens. please update soon so i can stop hanging off this fic. again i congratulate you on your awesome fic and it's orginality
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: DonnaTuskino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. When is are you gonna update? I am crazy about this story. keep up the good work -_^.
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Reviewed By: sweetmelchan On: February 09, 2005 02:15 CST
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Good story I read the first one a while back hope you get around to finishing it someday.
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Reviewed By: warcraft On: December 02, 2004 03:43 CST
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PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: INU-EARS On: September 18, 2004 22:37 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!! I LOVE THE LEMONADE SERIES TO DEATH!!!! PLEASE DONT GIVE UP ON THEM NOW!!! YOUR WORK IS AMAZING!!!
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Title: EXCELLENT!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have now read both Lemonade stories! THEY RULE! Ummm is chapter 15 the last one in the sequel? If it isn't UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: milady On: June 15, 2004 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story and I hope you update it soon...
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Reviewed By: inu-ears On: May 29, 2004 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!! please update soon!
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Title: It's me Miss Nikki
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: May 19, 2004 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! I've been printing this story out, and I don't think the teachers like me coming in empty handed and leaving out with a thick stack. But I like the long chapters and this is the best sequel ever. Well I don't think I've ever read a fanfic with a squel. I like it so keep up the good work. Love MN
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: sorena27 On: May 14, 2004 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Great chapter. I can't believe I hadn't checked up until now! Well, glad you updated. ^_^
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Reviewed By: stephino On: April 29, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANKS FOR UPDATING!!! i was afraid you forgot this storie^^, i do have a bit of constructive critisisum...the constant talk or "aura" is really annoying. ut you have a great writing talent
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 12:56 CDT
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So this Inuyasha did know Kagome at fifteen... But this Kagome didn't grow up in Tokyo or go through that well. Did something happen to make her forget, or is it some previous incarnation Inuyasha remembers? (Reads on) Okay, so it is. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The cutest little dead tart this side of the well, eh Yash?" ~~~ But what's this? The underplot thickens; it thickens like thick things.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 18:33 CDT
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I read the first 13 chapters on the Hero in the 21st Century site and have been waiting and waiting for more. Please continue on!
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Reviewed By: Tori16 On: April 04, 2004 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Another Update! I can see the stage being set for a bit of remorse from Kikyou. Interesting that she showed up at all. As always, I enjoyed this chapter and am hoping that you won't make us wait so long for the next update!
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