| "Rain and Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: tenshioni [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story sooooooo much and you used one of my favorite linkin park songs runaway! yyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kopy_kat14 On: February 14, 2003 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so GREAT!! Update soon, or you shall feel PAIN!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hallia (yet again) On: January 27, 2003 18:01 CST
Comment/Review:
okay, this chapter was AWESOME. i still apply the criticism from my previous reviews, but BRAVO! i want more! you're doing REALLY good with this story. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Hallia On: January 27, 2003 17:51 CST
Comment/Review:
i read your other story, Love, first and i thought i'd read this one too. your writing style is pretty original and you've got great ideas. Some constructive criticism for you however: a) SPELL CHECK!!!!!!!! b)GRAMMAR CHECK c)make sure your fonts are consistent. i noticed at the end there that the last few comments were the same font as the song lyrics. it's kinda stupid to have diff fonts if they dont stay consistent. d)cool it with the author notes mid-story. they kinda ruin the mood and everything. we appreciate your insight, but not that much. Anyway, i again want to ensure that you realize this is CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. just my advice. |
Reviewed By: radical_edward02 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was wonderful and i hope you write more of it |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: January 26, 2003 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am crying... did you know that? Well I am. That's cause' it's very sad. But also very good!!! Really! I swear it is!!! PLEASE HAVE LOTS MORE OUT REALLLLY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!! ARigato! |
Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so you gave him the frying pan huh? So did i! hope to see the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 20:04 CST
Comment/Review:
To I_love_Yugi_and_Davis: Yes, if I can manage to perfect my lemony-goodness then I will, but untill then... And yes, they love each other.
Kina: *.* I'm seeing stars! Look! People reviewed! |
Reviewed By: Something On: January 25, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story Please Hurry And Finish. |
Reviewed By: AngelEyes On: January 25, 2003 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE NOOOOOWWWW!!! puweease??? |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 25, 2003 13:50 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is really good so far! I hope you add another chapter really soon! I like the plot so far too. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! This story kicks ass
Yugi: I'm famous but miserable. When do I get 2 be happy?
Will this become a Yami/Yugi yaoi? |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 06:58 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY! *Dances around in circles cheering and smiling* Thank you, thank you! ^__^ I have the second chapter ready, but Ithink that I need to re-read it and fix some mistakes.... But any-who.... THANKS!!!
*Runs off screaming* I did it! yay! *Sings* E, noche drife, farfellona, aborrotso, note de jour no decour no de encore haha! There's life in these old fingers yet!!!! |
Reviewed By: SSJZTRUNKS On: January 24, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS GREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT PLZ RIGHT MORE I AM BEGGING "LITTLE PUPPY DOG EYES" |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this and can't wait for the next chapter. |
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