| "Broken*" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 03:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely excellent story!! I enjoyed reading every second of it and I truly believe you captured the characters' true essence. ^^ Even though there was no Miroku or Sango I believe that allowed you to focus more on Inu, Kag, and Ship and give them more detailed personalities and more angst. I was surprised at how effortlessly you dealt with the plot and shaped it and made it into somethign beautiful. I truly hope you continue writing more Inuyasha fanfics as you truly have a gift. ^^ My only suggestion for improvement would be to make your chapters lengthier and your stories longer. ;)
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 09:11 PST
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Nice...hands down!
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Reviewed By: melonious On: February 14, 2006 16:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello, i think this fanfic was absolutely brilliant, it was funny, sad, and it really spoke from the characters, you could really put us in their shoes, which i find an amazing talent, you're an excellent writer, and i hope you persue this writting style, it's very charming. Yours truly, Melanie ((nickname-Melonious))
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Reviewed By: SabKnight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 00:47 PST
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Wow! I really liked your story! I started reading it earlier this evening and I'm already finished! Your writing is wonderful! The ending (the REAL one) was very cute I thought...and I was impressed with your portrayal of Inuyasha and Kagome. So, that said, there's only one thing else: keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 20:27 PDT
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Sometimes you find the most interesting stories by chance, luck, or fate. I think all three played a part in me finding this. I like the style you used to write this, it has an episode feel to it which I find refreshing. There were only a couple places I felt it was off a little. Phrases not actual story. In chapter 3: ...if there'd been some way to travel back in time and beat the living shit out of himself for having acted like such a first-class jackass, he would've happily done it. to me that doesn't feel right; not because of the character, but because of the time frame. Something more like *...if there'd been some way to travel back in time he would have gladly done so and torn him self limb from limb for having acted like such a fool.* Not those words exactly its just an example of sorts, but it seems to fit more in with a character that lives mainly in the past and is only a visitor to Kagome's time period. I loved the small parody you added at the end of chapter 9 for your friend. We all have things that just will not fit into the story but would like to share and this was a great way to do so and still not confuse the story. I am glad that the report of your story being copied came up, if it had not I'd never have found such a jewel to read.~Fanilia
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Reviewed By: ReasonedTomcat On: September 05, 2005 04:50 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant, one of the best fanfictions i've ever read. Exploring a whole different side of taking off the rosary. (anyone who reads fanfictions knows it almost always comes off in romance fics) Angst, but a happy ending (fluff throughout a whole story annoys me) brilliantly done i'll be watching for more of your fics , count on it :)
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Title: back again
Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 10:23 PDT
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So this is the third time I've read this story. I love your writing, and in this case, this is one of the best stories I have seen on this site - obviously since I keep coming back, eh? haha. Thanx for posting it ^_^
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Title: OooH!!!
Reviewed By: Kap'n Nemo On: June 06, 2005 19:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh!!!! I *really* enjoyed this fic! (That grinding scene was powerful, man.) And the sexual tension riding right up to the end was AMAZING. Thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: dark_and_light_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 20:17 PDT
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i would love to hear more stories from you.your really good.hope you would make more for everyone.this actually reminded me of the characters too. i've also read this story about a few times here and there. :) Your a great writer!
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Title: Broken no longer
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 21:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for posting this on MM. I found it the first time long ago when you had it on Iridescent Dreams, and was heart broken when the web mistress closed it down, and I could no longer visit to read it. I tend to revisit favorite stories, and this is a long time favorite. I hope to see more of your stories appear. I promise to read them all.
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Reviewed By: webcomicreader On: April 05, 2005 18:36 PDT
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what happened to sango and miroku?
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 02:12 PST
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great story on to the next one ;D Zirra
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Reviewed By: InuDBZLuv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 19:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original and excellent plot line. I enjoyed this one!! Keep up the great writing
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Reviewed By: tingie On: April 03, 2004 18:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellant, I am glad that you didn't do a lemon. In my opinion, you're story was so well written, imaginative, and interesting that it didn't need a lemon. You are a very creative writer and I hope you will continue to write stories as captivating as this one. (note: I enjoyed this so much I have reread twice).
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Reviewed By: tingie On: April 03, 2004 18:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellant, I am glad that you didn't do a lemon. In my opinion, you're story was so well written, imaginative, and interesting that it didn't need a lemon. You are a very creative writer and I hope you will continue to write stories as captivating as this one. (note: I enjoyed this so much I have reread twice).
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