| "The Immortal's Series" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Cute Kitsune Kaydee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 05:04 CDT
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Tomas's current page is http://nighthawk.anifics.com/ ,e-mail there.
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Reviewed By: Cute Kitsune Kaydee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 04:56 CDT
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I was once known as Fox The Wanderer and Cute Kitsune Kaydee, now I am known as Cute Neko Hibiki. For the last time people, I'm not writing this anymore! Due to my co-author and I having difference of opinion, I quit. I have turned the entire series over to him. If you want an update go bug him about it. The group I used to hang around with when I wrote ranma fics at the Delphi Forum made it clear they think I'm perverted bastard, no good anything, and they hate my guts. Well, the feeling is mutual as well. They don't want anything to do with me, and I don't want anything to do with them either now_ we're not very friendly. I am through writing ranma and I mainly concentrate on writing Xander Harris at the Xanderzone yahooGroup, check it out and review please.
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Reviewed By: mini-kat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the different stories- manga and tv shows - incorporated into this story. I would love to read more of it. Well-done.
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Reviewed By: eternal sky king On: May 13, 2004 12:00 CDT
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keep it going!!!
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Reviewed By: Cute Kitsune Kaydee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 16:08 CST
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* Reviewed By: nameless author On: March 25, 2004 16:11 EST ok i am writing this review because it is needed. no offense or anything as i do not wish to drive you off from here. but IMMORTALITY from highlander which you are going off of for CHIBI-USA's immortality is wrong. no immortal gets their immortality through genetics. immortality from the series and movies is random. so if chibi-usa was to be immortal it would not be because of genetics but because she was chosen to be apart of the game from the series. also she wouldn't be able to have kids if you do decide ranma and her will have children later on down the road. @@@It's an alternate universe. Immortals here -can- have children. So can they. again i don't mean to offend with this review. @@@No offense taken. i am trying to help. @@@Oh, well thanks.^_^ i like the story i really really do. @@@Great!^_^ but somethings should be fixed like that immortality thing. if you want her immortal that is fine but make up a better reason other than 'she had it passed down through her family' again no offense it is just something that should be looked into. other than that the fic is really good and i look forward to another update. @@@Sorry, Immortals is dead Jim. If anymore is written on Immortals it will be Tomas who writes it, not me dude. Go bug him about any possible updates.*
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Reviewed By: Cute Kitsune Kaydee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 16:08 CST
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* Reviewed By: nameless author On: March 25, 2004 16:11 EST ok i am writing this review because it is needed. no offense or anything as i do not wish to drive you off from here. but IMMORTALITY from highlander which you are going off of for CHIBI-USA's immortality is wrong. no immortal gets their immortality through genetics. immortality from the series and movies is random. so if chibi-usa was to be immortal it would not be because of genetics but because she was chosen to be apart of the game from the series. also she wouldn't be able to have kids if you do decide ranma and her will have children later on down the road. @@@It's an alternate universe. Immortals here -can- have children. So can they. again i don't mean to offend with this review. @@@No offense taken. i am trying to help. @@@Oh, well thanks.^_^ i like the story i really really do. @@@Great!^_^ but somethings should be fixed like that immortality thing. if you want her immortal that is fine but make up a better reason other than 'she had it passed down through her family' again no offense it is just something that should be looked into. other than that the fic is really good and i look forward to another update. @@@Sorry, Immortals is dead Jim. If anymore is written on Immortals it will be Tomas who writes it, not me dude. Go bug him about any possible updates.*
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Reviewed By: nameless author On: March 25, 2004 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i am writing this review because it is needed. no offense or anything as i do not wish to drive you off from here. but IMMORTALITY from highlander which you are going off of for CHIBI-USA's immortality is wrong. no immortal gets their immortality through genetics. immortality from the series and movies is random. so if chibi-usa was to be immortal it would not be because of genetics but because she was chosen to be apart of the game from the series. also she wouldn't be able to have kids if you do decide ranma and her will have children later on down the road. again i don't mean to offend with this review. i am trying to help. i like the story i really really do. but somethings should be fixed like that immortality thing. if you want her immortal that is fine but make up a better reason other than 'she had it passed down through her family' again no offense it is just something that should be looked into. other than that the fic is really good and i look forward to another update.
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Reviewed By: Stakes On: March 05, 2004 02:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Fic was bloody awesome, update soon eh.
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Reviewed By: Leen On: February 25, 2004 11:23 CST
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I've always loved this fic Although Kitsune it is a shame that the spoiled people at FF chased you off because i always thought your work was very good
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Reviewed By: Duvae On: October 03, 2001 11:40 CDT
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Hi!
I really like this series. It's seriously cool. But I think I read the first part a year or so ago ^_^' That wa a looong time ago. at least for me. I like it. And I'll dutifully await the next part. Waai! |
