| "Lips Sealed" Reviews/Comments [ 164 ] |
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Reviewed By: samiam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!! as expected but you have GOT to update!! I mean Inuyasha is not the only fustrated one^_^ oooh but when they DO finally get together......can't wait so----please, please, PLEASE!!!! FINISH!!!!^_^O' Mighty Queen of the Lemons!! your faithful subject--ME |
Reviewed By: Saturnine Succubbus On: August 01, 2003 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic... You are a truly talented writer, but you should already know that what with the sheer magnitude of reviews you get. This has got to be one of the best citrus-flavored fanfictions I've ever read. Keep up the wonderful writing! (Like you wouldn't!) ^^ |
Reviewed By: Vash the Stampede On: July 31, 2003 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. It was wild and unpredictable. Inuyasha is still being his badass self and not losing his edge. |
Reviewed By: DreamStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 14:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please everyone out there is asking you to write either chapter. PLease this is the best, by far,fic i have read. PLease hurry and write a new chapter. Yes, i know that it says "One Shot" but please write a new fic that continues this one or something please. |
Reviewed By: Shadow Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally cute, and i cant wait for u to updatre it. have fun and keep up th good work! |
Reviewed By: Pheonix On: July 10, 2003 01:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, I love the story but you can't end it like this. I don't know if you have other stories to work on but please please just finish this one. You can't just leave all of hanging. Onegai i am begging you to write more on this story. |
Reviewed By: Masaio [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 02:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn good fic, up-date soon please |
Reviewed By: Pandora On: June 28, 2003 10:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uwaaaaaaaaaa! *falls out of chair*
Damn, this is probably the best lemon I've ever read for ANY fandom; simply because it does not follow the typical lemon format in the least, and I was on the edge of my seat the whole time thinking, "Oh my GOD!" I think the actual process of their getting to the um...sexual point (I refuse to use baseball analogies...) that they did, you accomplished a FAR more sensual and interesting atmosphere than any usual wham-bam lemon. But then, this seems to be your forte..."Unexpected Opportunies" was excellent as well. You also manage to keep everyone perfectly in character, despite the situations or emotions. You've done an exceptional job here. Now, as if you probably haven't heard this a million times already, I know you're a very busy woman, but I'll just put my vote into the "Please have another chapter to this story as soon as you can!" hat and be on my way. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT! That was just about the best lemon I have ever read...Ever. OMG! Okay I'm aroused...JK! Okay anyways that needs a sequel...Geez the Inuyasha scard me a little on the last bit. I think I would've been ready to kill Sango if I was in Kagome's place... |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You'd bettezr gonna 'end this !!! i simply luv it !!
go on go on go on go on go on go on go on !!!!!
can't wait !!!! |
Reviewed By: Brit On: May 28, 2003 21:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO! I love how you kept Inuyasha in character, making him all possessive-like. This fic is VERY well done, and I must say, I found it thoroughly enjoyable. Please update soon. ^_^ I absolutely love this. You've become one of my favorite authors. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Nauti Bitch On: May 26, 2003 04:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHITE!! *pant pant* *takes a cold shower* daayyyumm grrrl...i luv how you hav ur characters IN character..i hate that sappy stuff when inuyashaz all snively *bleh* you totally got him with his posessivness, |
Reviewed By: Rianna On: May 11, 2003 22:49 EDT
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oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!!! how could you do that that is just mean. how could you just end it there? that was absolutely evil... please update soon!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2003 17:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
I have probably read this piece more times than is good for my GPA, and I think I figured out what was bothering me about this piece. Now how to phrase it...
The paragraph that starts with "Inuyasha opened his eyes," implies that Inuyasha is doing something suggestive of the title of this piece to Kagome.
The paragraphs that start with, "It was difficult," through "A stark red haze," mention fingers, but with the paragraph that starts with, "And if Kagome," they're back at the other thing. I think it's a continuity error.
...not that most of us won't be too distracted by the rest of the story to notice... |
Reviewed By: xi_hou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 03:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great jumping jehosephat...I don't know what to say. I can't breathe...
Absolutely incredible writing. |
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