| "Hamster XXX" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: Jaded Innocence
Reviewed By: *ahem* you know who On: November 28, 2003 15:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um, I rated the enjoyment factor an 8, cuz, uh, I've never read something like that before *blush* This was interesting, but it confused me, since I'm kinda naive, so enjoyment got an 8, and yeah..er...good job
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Title: geez
Reviewed By: Mitsukai On: November 28, 2003 15:02 EST
Comment/Review:
That's you people's problem, it's like your afraid of reading anything original.
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Title: Uh, let's cut the custom character crap
Reviewed By: Magne_Hyakkulegger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, your writing style is pretty good, but let's stop this original character nonsense. Most people look at a fic, and if they don't see names from the show, they stop reading, which I ALMOST did
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Title: The one guy
Reviewed By: Bobo teh Munkee On:
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasp! Slaps Yami Bijou* Hahaha! |
Reviewed By: Yami Bijou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 12:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS TERRIBLE!! *Slaps author* HOW DARE YOU DO THAT, YOU SHOULD BE IN A MENTAL HOSPITAL!! |
Reviewed By: Big Straight Al On: August 23, 2003 09:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for you to continue this, great job! |
Reviewed By: Bob On: August 20, 2003 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Supaku and Kurica seems awfully like a Stan/Pashmina thing...
Does this mean Supaku will get Pashmina?
And as for Spat...eyes don't glow red when you get horny...there are other forces at work here. Please update! |
Reviewed By: Light Sneasel On: July 07, 2003 23:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
Intreating, since I finally got the game Ham-ham heart break. I now want to know if there are any negative impacts to his actions... I'm sure the other ham-hams can't let this stand... well we will see.. |
Reviewed By: moogle64 On: May 27, 2003 21:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa didnt see that commin. keep writing i gotta see what happens next. cya
P.S. i liked the previous chapter 3 story |
Reviewed By: moogle64 On: May 23, 2003 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story so far!! please update soon! i must read more!! cya |
Reviewed By: moogle64 On: May 21, 2003 02:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is great stuff! and i have to agree with sneasel about that fight with rosa and josh. keep writing i wanna know what happens next! cya |
Reviewed By: Mitsukai William [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 12:46 EST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm... I don't want to give away too much, so I won't say a whole lot. But in Hamster Neo, the next series, the main character is the Holy Warrior.... a warrior that can weild ALL of the swords. (Well, the Holy, Demon, and Urutora ones anyway... there are a few more, but those don't count) When he gets all of the Holy and Demon swords, he can summon the Meian sword, and when he gets all six, he can summon.... well, I don't want to spoil it. Only problem is, the swords are scattered everywhere. |
Reviewed By: light sneasel On: March 20, 2003 12:06 EST
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I thought there was someting there... Kinda funny how Rosa won that duel, even though I winced when she did it...
Nice work and everything... just one question... if they have kids, will they inheret their parent's swords? |
Reviewed By: Undercover Ham-Ham Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 20:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well um well, it's not bad, but need more to see where your true talent goes in this field, Hamster X was a blast, but a prologue cannot define your lemon ability, please right another, also did you laugh when William said Mmmm, I know I did, it seemed too funny, I don't understand why...anyway make another, and again a nice prologue! |
Reviewed By: Light sneasel On: March 16, 2003 10:36 EST
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Intresting, so that's what old Will was thinking... or not. Goes all out of his way to bring her back then... never mind. Well I honsetly have to say that I did see something like this could have happened. And I amire Kurica for having some restrant...
anyway, nice chapter. |
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