| "Parliament Of Twilight" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Caps On: March 31, 2003 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is really cool. I didn't get to review on ff.net, so I thought I'd do it here. Everything was great except spelling/grammar, but I understand about you not not having a beta reader. Can't wait for the next part!
Oh, by the way, Dr. J was the scientist w/ the prosthetic-y mechanical arm or hand or whatever, and Professor G was the one w/ the big nose and mushroom hair you were talking about. Just thought I'd clear that up. |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 13:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Karen: Awww, how cute!
LD: *shakes head at alter ego*
Karen: I wish you wouldn't call ME YOUR alter ego. However, not the point. that was totally adorable!
LD: I don't think it makes sense for Seto to suddenly be so kind to Jou. I mean, he goes from whipping the boy to comforting him.
Karen: it is supposed to be romantic, stupid
LD: *mummbles something about needing lessons on insulting people from Jou*
Karen: *smiles brightly* please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 07:30 CST
Comment/Review:
ooohh..good! So, do we get a lemon? Pretty please? and update soon! |
Reviewed By: KC Matthews On: March 31, 2003 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked you story. Your style was goo and so was everything else. I nearly teared when it was taken off Fanfiction.net. so I saw this site address on the summary so i came here to read the story. I love it! |
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