| "Mysterious Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon Tamer7 On: September 27, 2003 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its kul.But Tae,Seto,and Ryou BETTER NOT die!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ice Angel2 On: September 26, 2003 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this to be quite enjoyible.I just hope Bakura doesn't die...
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Reviewed By: Dragon's Lair On: September 26, 2003 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleez do finish!i loved it so far.ps-dont let Ryou die!
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Reviewed By: Setoluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 20:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Seto....I hope he doesn't end up dying...Damn it,think my tears have screwed up my make-up... |
Reviewed By: xlovesxyamix On: July 11, 2003 09:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really an amazing story! Keep up the good work, and please update soon =) |
Reviewed By: Setoluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Seto! I hope he doesn't die. |
Reviewed By: chibibaka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amazing. i wonder who the girl is and how she has a connection to yugi and the gang. this was a very original idea, and i love it! plz write more soon!
^_^
byee |
Reviewed By: Yugiboy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 19:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is great despite all of the bad things happening.What will become of Tea,Ryou(Bakura),and Kaiba?Write more soon |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2003 19:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!
Click on Submit/Edit fanfics, then over on the right next to this fic it says Edit|Delete over the Chapter Manager. Click Edit. Ok here you can change the title, genres, ratings, whatever.
Write more! |
Reviewed By: pure drivel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Bakura..........I want to know what happens next!
WRITE MORE GODDAMMIT!
Sorry, spazzy right now. |
Reviewed By: Sarah White [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic it got my attention.please no yaio.
Continue please. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 20:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is so great! I love it... everything is so dramatic. i hope seto's not going to go all suicidal now.. PLEASE let that not be it... |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2003 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your fic! (My fic's the same way...I've only got 4 reviews...) Please write more! and don't make it yaoi, please please. I have to find out who this girl in the picture is! and what is making Bakura so delusional...and if he's ok! Ok, that's it...you're posting again TOMORROW! lol ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Setoluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good,I liked that chapter.Please do more!Even though I don't really like the thought of Yami seeing Yugi naked[because I'm an anti-yaoi person]but I still wanna read more! |
Reviewed By: duos_bunny On: April 06, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wanna know what will happen!! write more!plz plz!
~bunny~ |
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