| "I Never Knew" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aisuru Hito On: July 28, 2025 03:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good fic. Even though Yami was so awful you included just
enough nuance that there was still some good in him that I was able
to feel bad for him when the puzzle got smashed. I hope somebody
thinks to have Ryou get counseling to help him move on from his
ordeal. The relationship between him and Seto seems healthy and
dandy on the surface, but they also rushed into it. This is one of
those conclusions where a time-skip where the victim got
professional help to start the healing from their ordeal would have
done wonders. But I digress the most important thing about
fanfiction is the enjoyment factor and I had plenty of fun reading
this. Cheers to you.
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Reviewed By: girl who loves yaoi On: June 05, 2005 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading the fic and it really was one of the best fics i have read. i wouldv like it better is if ryou died.not because i dont like ryou or any thing like that,and i usualy dont want characters to die, but your story is so good ryou dieing just seems to fit for me.but i like the ending u put to.and if u want u can put another chapter about what would happen if ryou did die.so the story can have to diff ending.^-^ but thats only if u want. anyway the story was really good 8/10. but hey,nothings perfect
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Title: I Never Knew
Reviewed By: amethyst_rose1993 On: December 08, 2004 17:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! Oh mygod your on right up with Spyder web, my favorite author! That was great! I can't even remember anything bad about it! I'm going to recomend this to all my friends! You are a god! Anyone who gave you bad reveiws are idiots! *squeals and roles around on the floor* Anyway, keep writing your fics and sorry for only reviewing after this chapter. I like to do reviews at the end or fics. Your awsome!
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Reviewed By: jgal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 04:37 PST
Comment/Review:
...setoryou....not that i mind... but i would really prefer bakura ryou...
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Reviewed By: fishi_fishi On: March 16, 2004 18:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg im so sorry i havnt found your writting before! its amazing!!!!! keep up the exellant work
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Reviewed By: Guest 404 On: March 03, 2004 20:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your stories. You have inspired me to write my own lemon stories and hope you continue to write :)
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Reviewed By: al On: September 25, 2003 20:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
i don't get why people ask u to update. ive been waiting three monthes so far and they still didn't post that LAST CHAPTER!!!
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Reviewed By: QueenOfGames On: August 17, 2003 12:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
Nooo! I DIDN'T REALIZE THAT WAS THE END! ::cries:: Woot woot Seto and Ryou awwwww ::cries:: Hey uh what about a sequal? Ya know like what happens when they let Yami out inna year? ::looks hopefull:: ::tear:: I loooved this story!
The * Queen Of Games |
Reviewed By: snowflake334 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 11:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
I think its really really good so keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 10:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
what a fluffly ending!! Hee that was sad yet sweet. hey! are you gonna do a sequel where they put the puzzle and set yami free? jsut wondering. good story ^^ |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 03:29 PDT
Comment/Review:
*holds up sign* BAKURA X MARIK!!!!!! YEAH!!!! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 19:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
*chants* LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON LEMON!!!!! YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! HAVE I MENTIONED I LOVE THIS FIC?? |
Reviewed By: queen of empathy On: July 27, 2003 21:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic. It's a real change from what i usually read. Anyway, continue the story soon please!
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU CUT OFF THE CHAPTER JUST WHEN IT WAS GETTING TO THE GOOD PART!
P.S.:Keep up the good work:) |
Reviewed By: Kaji The Bloody Harlequin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LEMON!!! LEMON YOU RA DAMNED AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!! hehehe jk. BUT MORE LEMON!! man...i hate yami now... |
Reviewed By: Kaji The Bloody Harlequin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 19:56 PDT
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KILL YAMI!! do you not like him? lol |
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